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M -O-R-E PLEASE!
I was sitting here with one hand around my dick (not finishing) it surged at that part
where she said she is going to enjoy "having him" lick Phils dick of her juices . . . . . .
amazing
I could read this one every day
Time for Episode 2?
I remember reading this story to my gf in 2003! Wish the author went on to the next part. It is the definitive standard in Lit LW category.
No Way
Not a Fan.
1*
fag cuck shit.
SPELL CHECK FOR GODS SAKE
Between bad spelling and wrong word useage a good story line was wasted. Just like sucking a clit and licking a pussy, accuracy makes for enjoyment. Take a few minutes and proof read or get someone to do it for you.
I gave the story a five then deducted three for all the errors.
Not well written but still a hot story.
I would love if my husband would allow me to fuck around like this
Very Sexy
Wonderful story: had me panting almost from the beginning. The grammatical errors and wrong words should have been corrected before publication (accept is not except; quiet is not quite; etc,) Looks like a careless disregard of the quality of your own work as a writer. Otherwise, congratulations!
Well Done BUT 2...Because
I thought the story was very well written, sexy, stimulating and arousing BUT...
What killed it, he wanted to watch her with another man possible once; however, she dragged it on and teased him subliminally until she came up with the agreement.
Clever girl and obviously more into being a sleep around Hot Wife than she let on. The problem I have....she set it up with an open any time, as many and whom ever she wanted and the closer - if he didn't agree, they would stop now. She knew damn well he was hornier than hell and would sign. Next, not sure it came up but I thought the deal was no one they knew so that their reputation was ruined or her exploits exposed?
She wants him as a breadwinner cuckold and she has played it well. She always fancied the gym and had a hell of a time teasing and being a girlfriend to Phil!. This woman is was a closet slut and did well with being married and now having a cuckold so she can fuck whoever...Phil won't end up being her only lover...wait - fucker!
In a story like this, I always wish the writer would carry on for a few more months and then one day cuck wakes up and realizes he is just a meal ticket and safe house for a slut and leaves her. Doesn't need to BTB unless she fights it, just leave, get on with life, find an honest women and no more fantasies.
My point, if she had gone with an arrangement with a one time tryst for hubby and maybe through the years once or twice more for thrills...that would have been a happily married couple with stimulating memories BUT - she was a latent slut, no class.
good story
I liked it, gave it a 5 because it went with loving wife, and although there was a little deception going on,(which wasn't right), but happened. He still got what he wanted, and enjoyed it, so did she. He was set up and used, but that's what he wanted. She did say during the story that he could stop it anytime, but he didn't. I think that will eventually be his downfall, but that's another story.
just a load of shit
His fantasy was to watch another man doing her, not this pile of garbage. What man, especially one who believes & tells us he's not a wimp, then demonstrates that is exactly what he is, or more to the point, A useless pervert. I know of no man who would roll with this crap.
Cuckold
Well told story is it fact or fiction, it seemed real though.
Only one star not for the eloquent writing which deserved a five star.
But because I can't get get a husband wanting another man fuck his wife, I think that he must be mental as it often it seems to end in disaster.
Works for me on so many levels
Enjoying the story and looking forward to more. It's hitting my buttons but especially the excitement of eating a cream pie. I haven't done it with my wife, not her thing, but have in the past with another partner. Long time ago back when it was referred to as sucking dick by proxy in the 70's.
Well done! I loved the sexy canter between the two of them. And me wishing i could have that cream pie from my wife. Like that would ever happen.Any way you hit on all of my fantasies and had a hard cock the entire story. Well done now give more.
Wet
So hot. Horny. The details. Wow. Made sex so much hotter. Loved it.
Wow...loved it
What wouldn't I give for my wife to treat me like this...fucking horny...xxx
YOU ARE FUCKED UP, TONY88888
MENTALLY ILL HUSBAND/UNREALISTIC, WIFE BRINGING CUM HOME TO HUBBY. Challenge you to write what really happens next. husband grows balls: divorces wife or worse. She goes to her black lover who is making minimum wage and can't support her. She moves around and ends up peddling her ass on the street corner- with no front teeth.
More please!
Please continue this story. So hot on so many levels
Over all, Good start!
However, there are some glaring problems:
First, get an editor!!
There's no such thing as a "mute point"! The proper term is "moot point".
If I see the phrase "in no time" again in your writing, I'm going to hunt you down and feed you the paper you've written your stories on!! Don't re-use the same phrase three times in a row within 7 sentences!!!
Second, do some research!!
What you are writing about is definitely NOT cuckolding. If the husband knows, even approves, of his wife cheating - this is not cuckolding. A true cuckold does NOT know his wife is cheating on him.
If the wife is not pregnant or given birth to a bastard child that is not her husband's child, then it is not cuckolding. Cuckolding requires as a basic minimum the wife be pregnant or have given birth to the bastard child that is not her husband's. But the husband believes it is his, feeds it, educates it, nurses it, treats it like hos own child!
Not so in this story!!
Great Syory
Really hot story, I exploded twice in reading this story.
Think it would be even hotter introducing both of them
to some Black gang bangs.
No...Husband is a Wimp!!
He can say he isn't but....hubby is a WIMP!
Just glad you went away.
Thanks for accepting your true role in this relationship. Now just shut the fuck up and suck it.
More please
Want to read more will he clean both
Yes, I want more
This is definitely the best cuckold story I've EVER read. Please continue on with the story.
Fuck yeah we need more!
I love the list she makes him follow and the promise to add more nasty things to the list is even more exciting! She'll have to bring in a few more lovers to make it real interesting and have hubby watching while she gets plowed, either in the open or in a clandestine location like the closet. Clean-up duty should follow and nasty wife Karin should make him eat his own cum as well.
ENOUGH !!! The Freckin' women has gone nuts in her controlling attitude.
She's taken this freedom and rubs her husbands nose in it daily. She no longer loves her husband for she's lost respect for him in her new sexual freedom.
It's exactly the was she predicted would happen in the beginning. It's time for the husband get some balls bring a stop to her actions. Enough is Enough!!!!!
Loved!
I absolutely love the mental and dialog. Her making him admit it. So great
Now to the Dark Side
For those of us that like the further spiral, you have done an incredible job of writing. Now in our (dark side fantasy people) imaginations we will now let her get further into a spiral where Phil introduces her to some friends, some of whom will introduce her to pot, cocaine, etc.. some female situations that she is now susceptible to because of the narcotics, etc... and so it continues so thank you for this story
Yes, more cuckold stories!
I loved this story. Just a bit too long and drawn out, but as a would be cuckold, I really enjoyed it. More!!!
Get to the point
This story rambled on forever. It was like reading a novel. Did u get to fuck Phils wife? Its only fair
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