All Comments on 'Catnip: A Halloween Story Ch. 2'

A literary sin was commited twice in this story: the narrator talks directly to the reader and breaks the suspension of disbelief. Then there's the spontaneous orgy with a bunch of half-human creatures that just occured too readily for my tastes. Also, why does catnip have an effect on the creatures that aren't half-cat? And lastly, I think it's odd someone would accept finding out they are half-cat without even making a token protest!

Don't take this comment the wrong way, I must have liked your story enough to bother commenting in the first place :)

An enjoyable story, with a nice tone and bit of humor. I liked the "sins" in the story, but they do distract from the storyline, and I had to reread the paragraphs to get back into it. All-in-all a nice read.

Now you got it. That was hot!! Really enjoyed it. Would love to read more.

its a bit better. try researching more with the gods tho. its very good that you put some comady and much more thought in to this one i like it and enjoyed it.. i hope ther will be more stories to come soon ... deff liked the party sean .. -LJ

i like he did a bird girl an cat girl it bean hot if he all so did the mouse girl.

Another good one, hope to see more.