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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/06/06

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whoa ouch, damn that was a sock in the gut... well written, man!

~as

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by annaswirls05/06/06

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your poem is mentioned in the new poem review http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=1 7302497#post17302497

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by irishcatsmeow05/10/06

WOW!

Very powerful and what a jolt at the end....you sure know how to evoke emotion.

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by angelicminx06/06/06

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Wow. An impressive way to get a point across. Last line was quite unexpected. ~Minx

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