All Comments on 'A Wonderful Awakening'

Not a typical lit story.

A lot more character development and emotional examination than the "normal" t&a story.

nice to see an original spin on life!

Great start! Please continue

I like the writing here, please finish the story.

i wish i could wake up one day and be a sexy as hell woman very good imagination plz continue with this story it is a good one hope to read the rest of it soon xxx anth/antonia xxx

There aren't enough stories where men turn into women by surprise. These stories turn me on. Please continue

we need more like this one. awsome story, please continue

That's just sadistic leaving off where you did, especially in such a well written story. Please, do continue!

LOVE your picture. Love the story too. One perfectly compliments the other. Sorry to be a man and old enough to be your parent, but you definitely turn me on and your descriptions seem to me spot on, Eagerly await the rest and if there's more will read it with your picture on the other half of the screen, one hand under my balls and the other gently stimulating a very hard erection. Thank you for your contribution to the pleasure! B.

As a fellow Londoner, I really enjoyed your story so far - please keep going. And your picture is fab...

Please, continue!!! This is a very hot story.

Great store. What happens next? I hope (S)he stays the way (S)he is as a Girl and finds a man. I dream of this happening to Me every night I go to sleep. Keep up the Great work . Don`t stop wrighting.

Too bad it was a cliffhanger.

Maybe the best story ever -- please write more just like this one!

loved it as I said cannot wait for more<eg>

I'm a guy who's always wondered what it would be like as a women. This was a fun little trip into your world. Please write more. I have a story of gender swap of my own and It is taking me quite a long time to write it. I hope it's as good as this one.

very curious and interesting. please write more!

Yea, i really liked this story. It added a few different details that other stories didn't. For example how her hips, breasts, and hair swayed when she walked. Very nice, which you would have wright more.

ok this story was brilliant, not only is it exactly what so many men think about atleast once in their lives, it has great potential to be even better. absolutely loved it! Also, nice to see a fellow Brit on here, especially one who has such a beautiful figure ;) t.b.

xxx

Great story and please please do write the next part!

Love the story so far .... hope to see more of shis saga real soon, also like to see more panty play in the story ;]

HI! thanks for writing me back. I'm not really doing anything right now, just surfing some crazy horny stories on literotica.com, these stories are so hot! I'm in my favorite yellow satin panties under my ultra short girls cut off jean shorts. listen, i've been drinking but I can come down on my bicycle even though I might be a little wobbley, lol. I'll just wear what i've got on now, no slippers, no shirt. let's go out for a drink together, what do you say? let's see if our chemestry clicks? okay, hit me back. I'm really horny

you need to do more, i came from this so many times it took 2 days to finish i was so depleted

You're doing a fine job, so follow through. I'd like to see at least one more chapter, maybe two?

Simply beautiful!

I can't tell you how many times I went to sleep hoping that I would wake up as a woman the next day. Years ago, I stopped having that fantasy ... I'd been wishing for it for so many years that it finally became obvious it just wasn't going to happen.

Your story brought back all those wonderful dreams I had back then. As I drifted off to sleep, my mind would entertain me with visions of how nice it would be to be a woman. I might just have one when I go to bed tonight.

Thank you.

Amber

This story is so hot I have to sit my laptop on an ice pack! Please write more ASAP.

More, please. Much more.

I joined Literotica because of this story.

NOT continuing would be a crime!

This is great please wright more

Please continue it, I would like to see more, and would LOVE to find out how all this happened.

Of course, more! You have started a scenario that needs at LEAST another 2 chapters of this length, or even a bit longer, say 3-4 pages each. There has to be more than just sex, and whether he/she reverts back, as well as how the transformation occurred in the first place.

What I mean is, add back in the support information alluded to so far. Can you do all that, as well as what you had all ready envisioned? I don't want to mislead you, but you've started an interesting series. Please! Do continue it !

An interesting begining, look forward to next part.

Very good start. But you need to add the reason for the transformation. Also need an internal conflict between the mind and the body. To the end was the adoption of the transformation. (Google-translate)

I really enjoyed your story. It is very true to some of the immediate problems Alex faces. Lucky he has an accommodating housemate, or these problems would be a little more difficult. His/her exploration of her new life is fascinating. Thank you.

Site won't let me enter my username. I am Alex from Chehalis.

Would love to see a part 2

This is very good so far. Well-written to. Please keep going.

I love this story can't wait to read more

I thought it was done very well, I love stories like this.

If waking up as a female, as in this story were possible it would be the answer to decades of tearful prayers and pleading with God. Of course, it is now sort of possible (with meds and surgery) and I know some that have gone the whole route. At my age it's just way too late so I'll just remain an envious older guy. Thanks for the story .......

Too bad this story will never get finished..