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I Win, You Lose

byMany Feathers©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/11/06

Arousing? Erotic?

I guess if you are sick enough it is.

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by Anonymous05/11/06

Very Hot!!!

Loved how the wrestling got hotter and hotter which lead to the bondage and lesbian stuff, keep writing this is good.. Good build-up and ending..

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by Anonymous05/12/06

Great story!

This was incredibly hot! Loved it!

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by Anonymous07/05/06

I wished...

That I could vote this a 10 to negate the 0 from the first sad fuck who posted. At least you and most others know the quality of your writing. Keep on writing wonderful stories, make the trolls even more jealous.

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by Anonymous03/08/08

HOTT

HOTT HOTT!!!!

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by Anonymous02/12/13

Don't think so.

The girlfriend would be HISTORY and the husband would be in the doghouse if not divorced in real life. Didn't believe this could/would happen

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by ticklechambers02/20/13

Feedback

Work on making your characters more believable. I liked your writing, keep on going! :)

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