Loved it...sounds like a good day to spend at the park with nothing better to do heh...and loved the end turn of events. Thank you for sharing it with us. a fan in Texas
This feedback is for the whole saga. I friggin loved it.
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Anonymous11/28/06
Wow....
This is for all 3 parts...man! I wish I'd get punished like that! That was hot! I'm not crazy about the guy leavin his sub without protection but heck, it's a great fantasy anyway! Great job!!
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Anonymous11/09/07
good idea
my wife loved it too, we will be doing this for fun too
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Anonymous04/10/09
what a naughty girl
thank god those cops stumbled upon her,hummm.wow what a punishment.loved it.
Great story with the exception that he did not protect her. Safety should have been in the story. But all in all a good read and great ending.
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Anonymous01/17/11
Not Quite Complete
Though the punishment does fit the crime i do feel that it is unfinished being that she was being punished for embarrassing her Dom in public. The officers should have replaced the items they had removed and let the punishment stand. I feel she got out of it lightly and that she passed out ment that the portion of punishment that the officers had intended to mete out was incomplete, which is also a punishable infraction, so the items should have been replaced with new batteries inserted and she should have been made to reawaken as she had been left by her master. I am most sure that her master had an agenda and had not left her unsafe. In my experience you do as your told. She obviously through out the story could not complete the tasks she was instructed to do unless under threat of an extreme action. Arguing? Begging? Complaining? NOT ALLOWED during punishment. All orders are to be followed at moment of instruction without fail. She was an insubordinate submissive and needed complete restructuring. You Do NOT embarass your Dom in public and NEVER refuse and order other wise punishment is required and hers was largely incomplete.
You really wrapped the series up well - perfect ending, a preacher's wife.
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Anonymous08/02/13
Very Hot!
Very hot and a great ending. Thanks.
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Anonymous12/03/13
Safe, sane and concentual?
Yes it's a hot story. But as with most public-exposure, D/s stories on here, it's not at all safe or sane, and debateably consensual, all three the cardinal rule of D/s, BDSM (at least sane BDSM). Any Dom who would leave his/her charge in such a dangerous situation is not a Dom at all, but rather an un-safe pervert. As a responsible Dom, I would have to recommend any sub in this situation RUN from anyone who would leave her/him in such a dangerous situation.
English
Yep
Loved it...sounds like a good day to spend at the park with nothing better to do heh...and loved the end turn of events. Thank you for sharing it with us. a fan in Texas
Holy shit, what a hot story.
This feedback is for the whole saga. I friggin loved it.
Wow....
This is for all 3 parts...man! I wish I'd get punished like that! That was hot! I'm not crazy about the guy leavin his sub without protection but heck, it's a great fantasy anyway! Great job!!
good idea
my wife loved it too, we will be doing this for fun too
what a naughty girl
thank god those cops stumbled upon her,hummm.wow what a punishment.loved it.
Wicked!
Best i have read in a long time and I read nearly every night. I'm definitely reading your other submissions now...
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hot
Great story with the exception that he did not protect her. Safety should have been in the story. But all in all a good read and great ending.
Not Quite Complete
Though the punishment does fit the crime i do feel that it is unfinished being that she was being punished for embarrassing her Dom in public. The officers should have replaced the items they had removed and let the punishment stand. I feel she got out of it lightly and that she passed out ment that the portion of punishment that the officers had intended to mete out was incomplete, which is also a punishable infraction, so the items should have been replaced with new batteries inserted and she should have been made to reawaken as she had been left by her master. I am most sure that her master had an agenda and had not left her unsafe. In my experience you do as your told. She obviously through out the story could not complete the tasks she was instructed to do unless under threat of an extreme action. Arguing? Begging? Complaining? NOT ALLOWED during punishment. All orders are to be followed at moment of instruction without fail. She was an insubordinate submissive and needed complete restructuring. You Do NOT embarass your Dom in public and NEVER refuse and order other wise punishment is required and hers was largely incomplete.
Great Ending
You really wrapped the series up well - perfect ending, a preacher's wife.
Very Hot!
Very hot and a great ending. Thanks.
Safe, sane and concentual?
Yes it's a hot story. But as with most public-exposure, D/s stories on here, it's not at all safe or sane, and debateably consensual, all three the cardinal rule of D/s, BDSM (at least sane BDSM). Any Dom who would leave his/her charge in such a dangerous situation is not a Dom at all, but rather an un-safe pervert. As a responsible Dom, I would have to recommend any sub in this situation RUN from anyone who would leave her/him in such a dangerous situation.
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