All Comments on 'Highschool Sucks, Hard'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hot story.

One suggestion: make your paragraphs shorter.

Hope to see more stories from you.

filthylittlesecretfilthylittlesecretalmost 18 years ago
Nice start.

Very nice first story.

ljaljaalmost 18 years ago
very nice

your story was so cool... ty /...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good "job"

very nice and erotic...can't wait to read more from this point of view

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great Beginnings

Shows that a girl can be a little agresive and turn out fine.

Please give us more of their adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Short but Sweet

More please

tinman69stinman69salmost 18 years ago
Great Little Story

That really worked for me!!! I thought it was a great story!! Now all you have to do is write one about the first time you give up the pleasure palace!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
C+

Not bad for a first effort. However, the numerous grammatical errors are incredibly distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very hot keep writing

You have a very good point of view writing style, I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
spelling

Has anyone ever told you that it is HIGH SCHOOL, not highschool???

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Makes me wish i could find someone to suck my dick.

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