All Comments on 'Sloppy Seconds Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
What an awful piece of writing

Sound like a drunken bull shit session between a pair of 40 year buddies

Please---no more

notveryvanillanotveryvanillaalmost 18 years ago
Very hot!

Great story...loved it. Would love to read more..Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
can't wait for more!

this is one of my fantasies,,, (str8 female here)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Like it!

Hurry up with the rest! By the way str8 female, you sound very interesting!

meatmywifemeatmywifealmost 18 years ago
Can't wait for more...well done!!

Squishypuss...Don't let the negative comments get ya. The nameless commentators don't get it! Glad to have you writing and sharing your experiences. I too love a well fucked pussy...keep up the good work!! I can't wait to see where this goes...thanks!! Your Lit friend Meatmywife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for your first paragraph that made it clear that this was going to be one of those sick piles of garbage. At least with your warning. normal people don't have to waste their time. I do get a little frightened at the number of writers who seem to write this stuff. What happened to the normal writers who used to be on this site? the Ct. Yankee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
just one too many of this type of story

No offense to the author, but I feel the need to answer the Ct Yankee. So again sorry author. As for your first story it reasonably alright. I do think this type of story should be in the fetish category, but that never seems to happen.

Ct Yankee asked... What happened to the normal writers who used to be on this site?... Ct. Yankee, I do not know, but it appears that more authors have either left or are in the process of leaving. For myself as a reader I may soon stop visiting this site also. It is a shame, because I really liked this site (especially the loving wives category) for both the in-depth emotional and somewhat erotic stories; and even for the plain old stroke stories.

Again sorry author for using your feedback to answer the Ct Yankee.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Great reading!

A good set-up. But I cannot help but wonder how is she going to keep from getting pregnant from all that cream pie shot into her. Your story does not mention the "Pill".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Drugs In The 70's Precipitated Many Foolish Acts

Another True Story WOW - You just couldn't wait to whore the little wifie poo out - well it is good that you didn't do the pimping after some children of hers - Bad ethics.

So after calmly and rationally thinking this self cuckolding yourself through several joints and 2 bongs you decided not to use a whore but to make one. Ah what the hell - like Bill Cosby's dad used to say "we can always make another - so sick it up who gives a damn. Ooops, bio data says 3rd wife. Hmmmm, maybe a falling building could send a stronger signal - Nah.

This wife pimping obviously excites the writer(s) and a few sicko's who need the husbands pathetic watching and male humiliation to get their jaded self up and off. Sad isn't it. The braindead husband initiates self cuckolding himself so he can watch big cocks and his now wife whore who once she realizes her asshole wimp isn't needed anymore, soon chooses a new pimp that she can respect.

Now ole braindead has got to cleanup his act to marry another woman to whore out - man its a vicious circle cuckster, but you are down for it.

So, writer of true stories, are we gonna jump right in with your respected bestest male friend or just drop her off at a bad corner??? A disgusting non-respect of one's talent.

This isn't erotic or arousing - well except for the socko's who are now your people - to cheer you on to new depths - or perhaps to get some help when you see what they really want.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
huh?

Two things you said have me scratching my head.

1) You're not treating her as an object, you're just showing off to other guys with your trophy.

Which is an object.

2)You might as well join her because she's fucking around on you already.

Why enter into a marriage with someone who has so little respect for you she'll break her vows without even discussing it with you, who does it behind your back? If that's the standard you expect, get a dog. It will be loyal and you'll find plenty of women out there to fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Story!

I'm going to email to my wife right now to read. Don't sweat the other comments. I'd never write anything until I noticed the immature lame comments that other people would waste the time to write. Get a life people! Hat's off to you guys. I hope you are well. - Ryan

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story !

As a seconds lover myself, you nailed it !

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Obviously Written by a Virgin!

So the cervix is lined up on the same axis as the vaginal canal?

And when his penis hits her cervix, she enjoys that?

And he can feel the opening at the end of his urethra (his piss hole) knocking into the opening of her cervix!

My God, what an uniformed moron you are! Clearly, you have never been anywhere near the anatomy you are describing!

Set your search in Google to limit it to images and look at some anatomical drawings of the area. The uterus and vagina meet in an angle, not in a straight line. For the end of your penis to hit directly into her cervix, your penis would have to be shaped like the letter, "L" (long part coming out from your body, open end of the short part as the tip of your penis). Or probably more like the lowercase letter, "j". Items insert ed inside a woman that do strike the fervix cause pain, not pleasure.

As far as feeling an opening in her cervix with your penis, your wife would have to be pregnant and in labor (or perhaps suffering a miscarriage) for her cervix to dilate (open). That process is called, "labor", and it's damn painful! It's unlikely your wife would be interested in sexual intercourse during labor.

Obviously, with that comedy of errors in your beginning, nothing after could be any better, so I stopped reading, but this was bad enoughy to give it a 1.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Exciting

Is there anything more exciting than asking another man if he'd like to fuck my wife? Sucking his cum out of her pussy maybe.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Scores indicate a lot of damaged, idiotic readers over the years.

Buster2UBuster2Uover 2 years ago

It is hard to conceive that there are so many asshats that are concerned about what other people like to do for fun and then have to disrespect them. Even more so when they can't do as good as the author here! I happen to get off on Sloppy Seconds myself. Just because of diseases common these days does not affect the fantasy one bit. Back in the 60's 70's and early in the 80's aides wasn't such a big deal. But these self righteous adshole that want to boss other people around and are self appointed morality monitors can all go to hell in my book. If you can't say something nice don't say it at all. Especially 26thNC seems to go to every story I enjoy just to slam the Author. Hey if YOU don't like it you don't have read it asshole! 5 stars

Buster2UBuster2Uover 2 years ago

These are fantasy stories. If you want to medical facts read something else like a medical manual of some kind. Stop with asinine elitist remarks about how a cervix is reachable inside a vagina. These stories are fantasy dork! It don't really have to be true or possible. Just saying. 5 stars

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Recent comments show severe brain damage in recent readers. Buster, the biker cuck, had too many recreational drugs during his fantasy 70's and 80's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Seeing my now wife naked and her legs open to accept another man with a clearly larger penis rub his glistening helmet between her labia searching for her entry and plunging into her is one of the most erotic sights ever for me. Long before we married she had enjoyed other mens cocks fuck her as i watched and masturbated and to this day we continue to do so. She has turned down the advances of as many as she has given her sex to and seeing her enjoy a well endowed man to differing heights or orgasm and telling him to cum inside her as his reward is truly exceptional to watch.

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