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by Anonymous05/07/06

Brilliant

Only one word to describe this: brilliant

Extremely well crafted with simple but effective imagery. I loved that second stanza and that ending was superb.

Deserves a 10

p.s your poem has been mentioned on todays reviews

Vampiredust

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by Tzara05/08/06

Very elegant,

Senna Jawa. I enjoyed this very much.

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by Anonymous05/13/06

Worth a 100

for the last three lines, no other grabbers, more like gab

signed
MNS
maybe
but remember you said I shouldn't exist

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