All Comments on 'Playing Hookie'

by silver_ingrid

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bos_lbos_labout 10 years ago
Perfect!

Everything about this is perfect! The style of writing, the characters, the storyline and dynamic! Perfect. I love that you added a sprinkle of the "daddy" kink. Such love between these two. I hope you write more and expand your story into much longer stories, I want to know more of these two! Also, more dialogue—I'd love to hear their banter! It was very cute and witty :)

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