I do believe that I enjoyed the title as much as the story. My one suggestion: tell us about the rest of that very long night! It's all well and good that your sexy Brit has a lovely oral fixation, but I want to hear about the naughty girl's tongue lashing!
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I do believe that I enjoyed the title as much as the story. My one suggestion: tell us about the rest of that very long night! It's all well and good that your sexy Brit has a lovely oral fixation, but I want to hear about the naughty girl's tongue lashing!
Well done
It would have been even better
If you'd built up the background
leading to the 3 knocks -
btw - lovely title, that!
fine until...
you claimed to have taken her jeans and panties off in one smooth motion. give me a break.
i actually liked your denouncement of stories that portray guys as cumming by the gallons, but then you added a reach of your own with that one move.
i agree with the other comments though, in that you could have built the story up more, and i would have liked to see a more drawn-out ending.
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