All Comments on 'Julie's Mistake Ch. 18'

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GrantLeeGrantLeealmost 18 years agoAuthor
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Please let me know, via anonymous email, if necessary, if it ever appears that I do not want reader comments. I was wondering why I had received none until I realized I had inadvertently not checked permission for it.

Should I continue the series?

GrantLee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Don't stop Now!

You have a wonderful use of descriptive adjectives.

Don't stop with either female character.

You can always backfill, like the bellboy at her house.

Looking forward to more .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More

Keep ém coming...the Julie series is the best..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
You must continue. And quickly please.

Yes, of course you should continue the series. It 's the best work on the site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Continue Please

Don't stop now, this is the best series i've found, please keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
yes, it is surely just a story!

in real life, that kind of sexual activity can't continue too far, too long,,, there's just too many billions, trillions, of little squirmy things swimming and dead in her body, mouth, vagina, and butt hole.

the human body is an extremely fine-tuned body and it can fight off most foreign invaders; but overwhelm the body's system with so many foreign entities, so quickly, and it will shut down and that's when you start feeling the pains from diseases,,,,

erotic/sexy? I guess,,, kinda like those well made porn DVD's, sure,,, but even porn "stars" take some good protection, by screening,,,, so, in some ways, this kind of behavior by this character is beyond porn actress, because she gave her body no protection whatsoever,,,,

i wonder --- just wondering here --- how people like this character reflect on life, if or when they catch an incurable or deadly disease like HIV or something? do they say, "God damn it, it's all worth it. Now I can die happy"???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Just a taste

This is by far the best story going, i wish i could read a new chapter every day.While this part was not your best, it became a nice linking story to future possibilities.There are so many places you can go now, with Halls 2 used ladies, a daughter, and the main and most interesting character slowly caving into sexual submission. Encore encore!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Keep going

Yep you have to carry on!!!!! GREAT series of chapters dont stop now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Superb storyline

If you should continue? No, you must!!! ;-)

Every chapter is great.

Maybe both women should meet in some confrontation?

But i trust your imagination / fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
more, MORE, MOOOOORE!

You must definately continue this series; I agree with the others it's the best series on this website. I regularly check for updates. Great work, you're very talented!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Mr White

Too big break was. Breaks are not of use for you. It is disappointed by last story. Write to a thicket, it inspiration is possible will return to you. One of the best numbers(lines) on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
What are you waiting for GrantLee?

Come on, everyone's waiting.

Ch 18 was okay. Not the best. Still ...better than 95% of the pap in this category.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hottest story ever

best story series i've ever read.continue it dude and do it fast. i chk this thread everyday for newer updates. gr8 imagination on ur part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Keep it up

you got a fan club, please write more and soon we check everyday

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
new chapter

Sorry about the wait for Chapter 19. I have just submitted it today. I also intended to leave a public comment, but found that I sent an anonymous comment (twice) to myself. It's a wonder that I can even type!

GrantLee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Chapter 19?

where is chap 19? Compliments on the great story though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wish there would be a movie version

Probably the best series I have read. Very good scene settings and vivid descriptions. I wish this story would be made into a movie someday.

MrSickleMrSickleover 12 years ago
Wonderful

Your stories are by far my favorite on this entire site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
julie has stamina

I have to say this she is a real slut for fucking

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Best chapter

Having Julie wake up in her own bed and struggling to remember the night before and her shock and shame at discovering that she isn’t even wearing her own clothes and wondering what happened to the former owner was a great touch.

The part were she remembers the guy blowing his load all over her face was a good touch. As a woman that action has always bothered me some. But here it just fits so good. Throughout the entire story, Julie is made to orgasm against her will by all guys who have sex with her, and here she remembers how it felt to be on her knees with the guy, and looking at his dick and thinking about

“What otherwise could have been an instrument of love, she recognized as a menacing, pulsating, fleshy object of subjugation. Humiliated, she felt reconciled to having to continue her sucking.”

Julie is naked kneeling before a man and while looking at his cock, ends up having an existential moment herself and her relationship with penises. 😂🤣

Then she’s flinching and twisting as her face gets pasted and juiced by him leaving her utterly humiliated and blinded. 😈

It was weirdly gratifying to see her not aroused and passionate but tired and embarrassed. The contrast of both!!! She was finally truely used in every sense of the word.

The mental picture of the scene is awesome!!!!! 😎

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Love it

Great chapter!

Now that Julie has learned what a facial is. It seems that she should have to give herself one.

Be humiliating as fuck for her to have a jerk a cock knowing that at any moment she’s gonna be getting pasted. Multiple guys - one at a time

What about at the office in the middle of the day, and trying to clean up so nobody notices?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting chapter to a great story.

Seeing how Julie’s marriage is ruined and over there could be more where her now exhusband goes to the brothel that Julie works at.

She wears a mask and keeps quiet for fear of him recognizing her, but then he figures out who she is… and gives full vent to his emotions … and much to her chagrin and discomfort he becomes a repeat customer of hers.

Hijinks ensue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Talk about a humbling of Julie! A group of frat boys gang up on her….. she swaps boats…. takes a cock in her ass and gets a face full of cum after even more guys bang her.

AnonymousAnonymous8 days ago

Like how she’s remembering at the beginning kind of like “Hangover”

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Hahaha!!! She got bukkaked! Next up a self-service bukkake with two guys

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