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Not enough
Story had potential, but too short and not nearly enough dildo play, you barely touched on it before they changed positions, and the title clearly implies much more than you offered. You have good ideas and are a decent writer, but don't be lazy, get into some depth in this scenario. You have the ability and imagination to write a really hot story, so do it.
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