All Comments on 'Key to My Heart'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Serendipitious meeting!

Sexy Redhead walks into a bar. The women hate her - the men are captivated by her walk, her looks, her sensual air. Good Write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
omg

That has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read. The details were great, and I loved that you went from the bar scene to the hotel room. Also it helps that I'm a red head, I wear little black dresses, so I added myself in there. oohh... just had to tell you that it was great.

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