Good story with a quick tempo and easy to read. I enjoy "coming out" stories where couples find an avenue to renew, rejuvenate or just explore themselves beyond their normal activities.
You really captured a lot of the essence of both Mardi Gras and the way women (and men) behave there. The gradual loosening up due to alcohol and excitement was just right. Great start and I look forward to more.
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Anonymous05/17/06
Good Story
I like the 1st person for this type of story as it adds authenticity. The theme resonates with many men who'd love their own wives to do the same I suspect.
Brilliant! I really like the first person writing and I think you captured well the ehtos/pathos of New Orleans. I was right along side you enjoying the show! Hey, show 'em if you got 'em!!
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"Coming out" stories
Good story with a quick tempo and easy to read. I enjoy "coming out" stories where couples find an avenue to renew, rejuvenate or just explore themselves beyond their normal activities.
Keep up the great work.
Good story. Well executed.
You really captured a lot of the essence of both Mardi Gras and the way women (and men) behave there. The gradual loosening up due to alcohol and excitement was just right. Great start and I look forward to more.
Good Story
I like the 1st person for this type of story as it adds authenticity. The theme resonates with many men who'd love their own wives to do the same I suspect.
What A Show!
Brilliant! I really like the first person writing and I think you captured well the ehtos/pathos of New Orleans. I was right along side you enjoying the show! Hey, show 'em if you got 'em!!
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