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Your story..
Has been mentioned on the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.
Your story..
Has been mentioned on the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.
I hear you like requests
I request you write more! Give it to us! I know I want to read more! Screw those anonymous haters.
great nasty Story
Only a women could write a story like this. I will have to check for more stories by you.
Can't wait to to have my gf read it to me riding my cock.
i am a woman
I really want to be fucked like that!
Just Another NonCon Turned Slut.
It's not a real noncon story if at the end she consents it and wants it to happen again. While it was a good read, it was complete bullshit. Nothing in it stands out. It's the same as all the other wannabe noncon stories.
Really?
People trashed my story for having an end that was unrealistic. I find that amusing since every single one of these stories have the women wet in the midst of being raped.
Just once it would be nice to read a story that gives more credit to women.
Don't let trolls get to you
You must write your stories to please yourself, never let others silly comments get you upset.
There are those who go about the internet deliberately being hurtful. For some reason they get a sick kind of pleasure from tearing people down.
Keep writing but don't expect all the comments to be constructive, and whatever you do, don't engage the trolls in any way.
That's just what they want you to do. Ignore them, they'll get bored and go away.
Mostly Good
Very good, except for the last sentence. It seemed as if, at the last minute, you could not let the subject feel defeated or victimized; and as an ending that didn't quite ring true.
VERY EASY TO READ
Like the quick easy read style. Very enjoyable.
CLOSING TIME OR CRYING TIME
either way your gonna get left, TK U MLJ LV NV
Pain and Pleasure
There is a fine line between pain and pleasure.
One enhances the other.
Each is a turn on in its own way.
Pain is arousing, when it turns into pleasure.
In addition, when the person being raped has no choice, at times that becomes a very strong arousal also and they are free to go beyond their usual comfort level.
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