Loved the sweet seduction and teaching for the first timer, would haved to have her as my first!! Well written and wonderful first time submission. Thank you!!
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Anonymous07/21/06
Great first effort
It's always good to see nice people enjoying each other. Thank you for a nicely written story.
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Anonymous07/21/06
best first story ever
perfect. keep writing!
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Anonymous09/17/10
So refreshing
Simple, heart wearming, consensual, that s what Sex should be like... Great Story
What a turn on reading this story was. Made me wish I would meet someone like this hottie. Male character should have kept in contact with her though. Maybe he could have done some naked Skyping with her,at least. Heh.
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Nicely done
This is one of the best stories i've ever read. Sweet seduction........gotta love it. More, please, more!
fantastic debut
what a pity jane isn't around to take care of the boner your story left me with
nice
good read, kinda a pity she left.
Great
WOW, wish that would happen to me..;-)
Great story but a bit too short, maybe you can write a part 2 perhaps?
Otherwise excellent writing.
Good, but...
It was a good story and I enjoyed reading it, however; the dialoge seemed to be forced, like the characters are bad actors reading a script.
Now the story itself was good, great idea for the setup, but try and work on the character's interaction.
Very Nice!!
Loved the sweet seduction and teaching for the first timer, would haved to have her as my first!! Well written and wonderful first time submission. Thank you!!
Great first effort
It's always good to see nice people enjoying each other. Thank you for a nicely written story.
best first story ever
perfect. keep writing!
So refreshing
Simple, heart wearming, consensual, that s what Sex should be like... Great Story
Very Erotic
What a turn on reading this story was. Made me wish I would meet someone like this hottie. Male character should have kept in contact with her though. Maybe he could have done some naked Skyping with her,at least. Heh.
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