All Comments on 'On the Bus: Naughty Whispers'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 18 years ago
Nice start

With an interesting twist.

I'll have to keep reading this series to see where it goes.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Scent of a Woman

Mmmm! This was a yummy little story with a fun little twist at the end! Very intrigued... great job. :)

jushornyjushornyalmost 18 years ago
What A Way To Start

Great start to what I know will be a wonderful Bus Ride. The twist certainly surprised me, great idea

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Bless your twisted mind

DC:

I should known by now . . Thank You. Ronnie W.

damppantiesdamppantiesalmost 18 years ago
Good one!

That was a good start to the chain. Nothing like a bit of mystery!

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Surprise!

Nice ending!

JustaSCOUNDRELJustaSCOUNDRELover 11 years ago
Good Job

That was very nicely done and I loved the twist at the end.

Mike

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