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Well...

...Too short - but sweet all the same:)

You missed writing about the best part.

I always look forward to good descriptions of the smell of good well process shit.

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Well written, although I'm not a fan of second-person perspective. And while I appreciate that you got right to the good part, I'm curious to know why it's been a "long time" since they've done this. It might have heightened the drama to know why it's so special.

Like the female perspective

I liked your perspective from the woman's viewpoint. Most of the anal sex stories are from males and are too vulgar. Just enough hot words and action to be a real turn on. I was able to relate very well to what you were portraying...

LadyLovesBlue

Exdellent.

I am astonished

Astonished at the sensuous immediacy of your writing. The ease with which I enter the scene, drifting on your words, to quickly become embroiled in the excited immediacy of our entwining arousal provides everything I could wish for in coming here to read your writing.

Outstanding.

Very erotic, which is what this site is supposed to be about. If you like anal fantasies, check out Leezy's stuff.