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Leftovers Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/19/06

Whoa!!!

You got me hooked for more! Doesn't matter this story isn't "that" erotic, you really have this insight where people can relate to... it's somehow more "human"...

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by titania12312/30/12

EXCELLENT START!!!

I am quite impressed with this first chapter. Exceptionally well written, unusual imagery, great character description...this story has a TON of potential...I hope the remaining chapters hold up to the high bar set here. Great Job!

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