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Very nice
A sweet and enjoyable story.
Darn nice story DG
I don't know how you write such good stories, time and time again. Again a great read.
with the highest regards
An avid fan
Anyone who remembers Mr. Ed
is O.K. in my book!
When it's you and you provide an entertaining story for us to read, it's even better.
Thanks once again for sharing.
cageytee
WILBUR !!!!! another good one
DG
I know I comne across as an obnoxiousness loud mouth jerk sometimes but your stories are REALLY great.... the underlying theme -- the way you take adversity and use it in a positive way to build a better life is just so great... and endearing and heartfelt
Yes LIFE is often good and when it isnst it can be again if we stick with it. All storms have endings and all sunny days sometimes have storms.
This was just BULLY!!!
Good story as always from DG
Great story and the background set everything in motion with such great character developement and flow.
Thanks for the entertainment.
good
another great story
I afraid I have to go along with cageytee!
But I guess I'll get over it. Mr. Ed! Bah! Humbug!
DG, I have to give you the highest accolade I can give: you have matured into a real story-teller! You always write about real life in the engaging ways.
I really liked the emotions here, particularly with the girl asking him if she could call him 'daddy'.
Even the early part with the wife seemed so believable, like a true story. It was a little sad, but life is like that sometimes.
A ture love story! Great job, DG.
Regards, DJ
A wonderful
and sweet story. I very much enjoyed it.
Great story
A story like this gives all of us old codgers hope!!!
Boy, just having a cook as good as Kim would sure take care of many of my problems. You didn't mention how well she was with wifely "duties". Rachel sounds like a wonderful little girl. Like her mom.
A really heart warming story.
Another good one
Thanks
PATHETIC
Same storyline that you've written in the past just different character names. 1.Beloved wife dies 2.Husband mourns but wait husband cheated on wife during marriage.3.Wife finds out and is upset and the sex they do have isn't filled with love(well gee I wonder why) but of coarse everyone thinks it was a beautiful story even though if the roles were reversed she would need to die and end up in the gutter, oh my god did I just say there was a double standard here, uh yeah I did.
Dr Pathetic-Braying in an Buffalo Herd Isn't Heard
as the diminuative single whinner (so far) you are better roller skating in it (oh never mind). You are entitled to your off base opinion as worthlessly constructive as it wasn't. Hmmmm Anyway - -
Author sorry for the outburst but we know how shy you are about such things - so sometimes one of us will take up the glove - slap it about or something.
A warm tender story about three bears and - no thats not it. A life like portrayal of people dealing with the possibles delt. Yes - approaching Story Teller Status.
Good Work Author - Don't Change a Thing again!
With Very High Regard
DG Hear
Thank you for the comments on my stories. Many readers ask me why I don't delete some of the derogatory comments. The main reason is so other readers can see what writers put up with. Everyone is entitled to his or her own opinion. I respect that. What I don't understand is why a person would read an authors story who they don't like. Then complain about it, time and time again.
With all due respect to the readers of my stories. I'm not going to change my thinking. I will continue to write what I feel. So if my stories are not to your liking, than move on to the stories that strike your fancy. If you want to torture yourself and read my submissions, and then take the time to comment. I will leave it posted unless you knock my editors. That's a no-no. You will be deleted.
Again thank you all for your comments, we writers write for that reason, (Damn, I called myself a writer, sorry about that)
With Respect of the readers
DG Hear.
good story
DG Hear I like all of your stories so far , keep up the writing and I will continue to read them
Mike
Thanks
DG,
Thanks for another fine story. I must admit I like the romantic ones better than the cheating wives but I do read anything you write. You have become a true "story teller". Be proud and I'll just wait for the next one.
encouraging story
To an old crock like myself, I thought this was a wonderful story. Many stories start out well and die at the end. This one started out poorly with husband cheating and he and his wife having a cold, unemotional marriage after his cheating , but the last part of the story was very heartwarming and filled with familial love. Nice comeback after a drab beginning. 60 year old George
Good Story!
I like cheating wife revenge stories as a general rule, but a warm romantic story gets to me quite often. This was such a story and had me all warm and fuzzy. (Now there is an image you would have to see to believe) Ed made his mistakes and paid the price for them. He had lost his wife even before she died. Oh, he had part of her, but not the entire package he had before she caught him cheating. He deserved to pay that price as all cheaters should.
BUT, it looks like he found happiness with Kim and that created a very warm and tender story. Bravo.
There is one sour spot in the whole story though that I feel I need to mention. The treatment of Kim in the concocted story of Ed going to ask his girlfriend to marry him is the sour spot.
It was in fact cruel. It had her in tears and wondering how she was going to live without this man whom she had already confessed she loved to her "friend" Molly. Why would Ed and Molly ever come up with this plan? It was hurtful and the whole episode was out of tune with the warm romantic tone of this story.
I wish you had left that part out of this story. Surprises are fun, but when they cause pain they aren't so much fun anymore. This one caused pain, if only for a few minutes, but real pain none the less.
Thank you for the overall warm story. This one point doesn't in any way override the romantic feelings but it could have been even better.
Your efforts are always appreciated DG
Charleybear
Heart-warming !!!
To an old fart like me, this was a truly wonderful story. After 33 years of a, not altogether, happy marriage our “hero” gets a second chance to love and cherish a wonderful woman. A heart-warming tale filled with loving characters. DG, you never fail to hit the mark, well done! I agree however with Charleybear, telling Kim that Ed was going to ask his girlfriend to marry him was a hurtful, cruel joke and “out of tune with the warm romantic tone of this story”. Never mind DG, you can’t always fully please even your most biased fans! Pete.
One Of The Best
We need more stories like this one that have a good heart.Too many of the stories posted in this site are just plain mean.Keep them comming,maybe more authors will follow.
I have to agree
DG You are a good writter. Probably the most loved on lit. But I have read this story from you many times over. It reads like a template, you are better than this. The others may love to read the same plot line over and over, but you seem to be making a carreer of this one. Please consider this friendly critizism, you have proven to be a better author.
still the best
DG i read this 2 times i still cry and laugh when i read it i hope you write more of these stories its better than those Loving wifes stories
Atlanta,Ga
Outstanding !
Damn, I have to quit reading your stuff at work. I'm crying like a baby. You are one of the best.
Still the best Story
I have read this story three times and it is still the greatest story the Mr.Ed part was great i used to watch that show alot i wished you had continued with the story based on Kim and the family and Kim having the babies it would have been so great to read about.Plus it makes me laugh and cry when i read this story.
Pat
Sometimes it great to have memory problems.
You can read stuff like this twice and not realize you have already read it before until the end. LOL
DG You did it again
DG. Another great story, dealing with real people with real feelings and fears, rather than the far fetched plots that we see in many of the stories on Literotica.During my life I have seen many triumph over adversity. Life isn't guaranteed to be fair, people do stupid things, the only perfect man was crucified for it. It isn't what life does with you, it is what you do with life. Keep up the stories
Yes, life is
great
Great story DG
I loved your story. I only have one concern. And it has nothing to do with the story. It is personal. The hubby wanted to go first. I dont, I want my wife of 46 years to go first. The insurance industry tells me that that probably won't happen. But what I worry about is her being here by herself. And I can not help her. As I get older that feeling gets stronger. Sorry about my digress. If life were perfect I would move to "Aspen Grove". Thanks for the great read. Jim
Nicely done.
A very nice story, sweet and tender.
Please keep up the good work.
good,very good
awesome,must have lived at least part of the story......
Last paragraph earned the "fives"
This thing is so old that the older comments aren't even stored. However, I wondered why the average was so high...after reading the story it was good...until the last paragraph and I realized you had hooked us readers so hard we couldn't not give you a five!
A great story
I occasionally read one of your older stories because you are such a great writer. I am usually as pleased as I am with this tale. You provided a new twist to an often overworked plot line. I only have one serious complaint, since when is 53 'elderly'?
Any 53 year old man who considers himself old has his head up his ass. If he is not taking care of his body then he is a pathetic lazy fool just like a 30 year old with the same attitude. Why would you perpetuate this ageist bullshit?
Thanks for writing a five star story.
Excellent
A heartwarming tale. It's great to read a happy ending for a change.
Cute
Cute
very good
I really enjoyed the story espically the part about the eldry gentleman and Ed told his son he should turn him over his knee.
Well was it a brother or sister for Rachel.
It was such a good story that it deserves a sequel just as good if not bette.
Ron Texas
Since I have enjoyed
reading almost everything you have written we could agree that I'm not a critic of your writing. That said, this very nice story read a little stiff and not as easy and smooth as some of your work. Sweet tale anyway. Scotty
a very good story of love
age is no barrier to love and they were good for each other...and the business will gro and grow.....bet they do their own catering for the wedding....
Why stay married?
He had the affair when they had been married 26 years. The kids would have been in their late teens at least. Why continue in a loveless marriage? She just tormented him for 8 years. Any wife who won't give blowjobs deserves to be cheated on by her husband. If she had been giving him blowjobs he never would have cheated on her! The wife should have just divorce him and died alone 8 years later.
Second reading
A most enjoyable story.
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