I Love You, Good Carlene

Great

Romance like it should be.

Boyd

*sniff*

Absolutly beautiful! Well done!

Another Classic Dismore Tale

Bigger than Big, and a great read. Once again, well done.

Wonderful

Dinsmore,
How do you keep doing it? One great story after another. As I said in a comment to another story of yours, when I see a new one from Dinsmore in the list I set aside some time to read and enjoy it. That time has NEVER been wasted! Thank you very much for sharing your talent.

nice story but...

Now please don't take this the wrong way but your opening dialogue seems a bit forced. Instead of letting the reader find out about Carlene as the story progresses in a natural way you have the interviewer literally spell everything out. How often would a manager talk about his boss' personal life, in great detail, to a prespective employee? That whole sequence seemed, like I said before, forced for the lack of a better word. I've noticed this in some of your other stories as well. It seems you choose to introduce characters through dialogue. While its a great break from the norm, it does have its limits and when you push it the whole conversation sounds unnatural. Just my two cents so don't take it personally. I loved the story however so good job.

Response to: "nice story but..."

For Christ's sake go back and read the damned story! Marie is not being interviewed for a job---she has the job. Now she is being brought into the inner circle. I am so sick of gutless pukes who haven't got the nerve to sign stupid and idiotic comments. The only thing worse is the losers who think they are venerable critics---who have never submitted a single piece of work!

There are just some people in the world without a scintilla of talent or creativity that have to knock down anything they know is well above their pitiful and limited ability.

Jealous little people who wouldn't know a good story if it bit 'em!

It's a great story and you damned well know it! Stop being a pathetic and petty jerk.

As Always

As always, your story was great. Just about had me in tears at the end. Music has been a very large part of my life and I love the stories you write about music. Keep up the good work.

Boring after three screens...

Boring after three screens (not including the writer's comments). Not boring due to lack of sex, just boring. Maybe it got better later (shrug). It didn't help that the author said it followed a formula. I have enjoyed several of Dinsmore's stories, even with interesting stories s/he has too much to say before starting the story.

To Anonymous in USA on the East Coast

If the story was so boring, why did you finish it? The writers who post stories are sharing their creativity with us. They deserve praise not a stab in the back.
As the saying goes, if you can't say something nice don't say it at all.

A Great Read

As my title says, a great read, one that stimulates the imagination so much that you can just imagine being in the audience at that concert. Thank you

WOW !!!!!

This is another 10-star contribution by Dinsmore.
Larger than life, yes, sappy?, eys, a wonderful fairy tale that could never happen in real life? - absolutely.
Did I enjoy it? - YES - HELL YES, it is a wonderful story.
Who needs reality when you can dream like this?
I cannot praise the writer enough for stories like this - if I could, I'd be a writer.
THANK YOU DINSMORE - and keep writing THIS GENRE - you're the best!!!

Simply Outstanding

I am a hard hearted person, so they tell me, but this story got to it. Please keep it up. Duke

I just love, lived happily ever after, stories.

Love Only.

Good Story.................
End was sort but good.

not enough

Excellent Story! Not enough new stories coming from the favorite romance writers on the NET.

One of the best

Any time I long for a well written romance story your works are the first to come to mind. Hope all is well.

Awesome.

Loved it. It is so good that my simple words can't describe it. Thank you for this timeless tale.

Yep - just another one of your regular stories -

So it is no surprise it caused significant eye moisture to develop -

Wonderful read with lot's of emotion - well done thank you so much.

Memories

Damp cheeks, an old granddad remembering things that could have been if he hadn't
been foolish enough to let things slip bye.Thank you so much. Well written,,Ill give it TEN
Best regards John J.

the two smartest, richest, most talented in business, music, and love people

drift apart for 10 years. But miraculously they reunite to make beautiful music together.

the end

You said you were reverting to a known formula

it worked.
thanks

Very nice 5* story

Romance is my favorite by far. Extremely well written this one as always. My favorite is down and out saved by a lucky chance stories. I do like hero stories, but wonder sometimes why authors feel like making their characters MORE than perfect. Greatest lover, 12 inch dick, a medal of honor every time the dude goes on patrol, the best singer of all time with 67 gramy's, 45 people killed by a mild mannered judo beginner, or ANY other pure BULLSHIT! OK author care to try or easy wimp out?

Excellent Story

The story flowed seamlessly without any drop in my interest. The anonymous who was critical of the story plot and presentation is just a Cretan who had no artistic abilities. He should go stick his head in a toilet to wake himself up from his drunken state.

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Oh! A liptard critic who has never written shit...fuck you.