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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Trail05/13/06

blue

drawn into your write like the slapping of a broken wind mill pumping and stroking sleeved pipe to pull an orgasim from mother earth >grin (~_~)

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by My Erotic Tale05/13/06

Mention

your poem was mentioned on the thread New Poems Reviews

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by Anonymous05/13/06

Great

I enjoyed this sensual write of yours

Vampiredust

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