Gift of the Goddess Ch. 09

Beautiful...

a perfect ending! Thank you, Angel.

I thought you would kill it

I thought you would kill this story with a bad ending but you showed me!

Thanks!

omg...

This was amazing. Wow. Awesome. Omg. Am I being repetitive? Well escuse me for not having enough words to describe this.

happy

one of many best stories here in literotica will want to see a part 2 like after the marriage

OMG!!LovedIt

OMG!! I could not stop reading this till the end. I loved it. I am in agreement with the other poster. This could carry well after the marriage. You have found a great story line. Thank you.

Ok

This wasn't bad. It would have been a good five if you had checked it for errors in spelling. So I gave it a three.

good story

but the ultimate domination would be him telling her to have his baby. though im sure they both would enjoy it. if it was real. lol.

loved the series

loved the ending, but i felt there was a bit of torture in keeping her on edge that long with that level of stimulation

I'd be great if you had an epilogue.

lacking imagination

it was a good story just wish there was some transitions between chapters

BRILLIANT

and just how it should end....so glad he got revenge on his cheating slut and her lover....

"Gift Of The Goddess Ch. 09:"- Jonathan and Kay - (Male and Female Fiancee's)

This story--in total--ends with the untimate of satisfaction of all great love stories; Jonathan has proposed, Kay has accepted, and their engagement is ground in stone!! As many writers are vain to do is continuing in an effort to make a story better; in the end it only ends the way the writer writes it. The reader's for the most part are not happy!

In my opinion this story has come to a magnificent ending--and it should end here! Any future that Jonathan and Kay have is now in the mind and fantasy of the reader; in my mind the Prince has his Princess, the Princess has her Prince, eventually have babies (as she is now pregnant), and "they live happily ever after"!!

Absolutely perfect!

Thank you! this ended very well, even if I'm sad to see it stop. I only wish that once they are married the power to influence others will pass on to another worthy person. Leaving him with only power over his beloved and a new story can be had!