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Living With Uncle John Ch. 03

byGoldeniangel©
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by MercyMia05/21/06

Thank you

So sensual, no direct contact yet between them but you've created a very exciting series so far. I look forward to more.

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by Anonymous05/21/06

Most of these Don't know what sex is or might be

went out of style in the 50s or maybe 60s. Today wehen the schools start keeping records of pregnancy in the elementaray schools a college age girl totally innocent should be put in science fiction.

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by Anonymous05/21/06

very good

U really now how to build it up, cant wait to read the next story!

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by tinakristina05/21/06

from another Brenda...

I wish people wouldn't criticise your story... it's fantasy, you should write it however you like! Besides... I was homeschooled and 'overchurched' and sheltered just like Brenda. You'd be surprised how much information a girl can miss out in such a protective environment.

I can't wait for the rest of your story!

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by Anonymous05/21/06

Great stuff

Hey,
You are one sick dude. I like the way you think. I can hardly wait for John to nail her. I know you will have her worshipping his cock before its all over.

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by Anonymous11/29/07

Get her

Get her good. . . can't wait to read on!

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by Anonymous02/16/09

good

edfewf

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by Anonymous08/16/12

Great story

Keep writing

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