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Cyber Becomes Reality Ch. 01

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by Anonymous05/21/06

too short

The story has promise, but you really should have made it much longer. Also, you could have gone more indepth w/ the sex scenes.

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by Anonymous05/29/06

Great Start!

I also thought it was too short and too rushed, but it was good.

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