All Comments on 'Cyber Becomes Reality Ch. 01'

The story has promise, but you really should have made it much longer. Also, you could have gone more indepth w/ the sex scenes.

I also thought it was too short and too rushed, but it was good.

Very good story line. Oh what I would give for a day or 3 of sex like this with the man that knew what he and l both needed. I do hope for another part of this story but longer and with more hot steamy passion.