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Bullshit
More shit from the queen of shit.
Got me going
This story got my cock hard.Ilike watcching my wife getting fucked while I watch also.
Thanks
Your story was mentioned on the New Story Review Thread on the Author's Forum of Lit. ~ Thanks Red
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Now that is surely an improvement. He went from wimp cock/wife watcher to pimp scheduler, to gay asshole fucker but with an option to be humiliated and pathetic as the writer wishes. Pretty sick & not arousing except for the few sicko's who need male humiliation.
Is a contest worth the respect & self respect(perhaps) lost here - kinda like you are what you eat or write to a degree.
Wasted talent to most but good luck surviving.
Shitty Teaser--Needs Work....A LOT OF WORK!
Pure shit from someone who obviously does not know much about fucking.
I think it was GREAT!!
SOME of you people don't know a great story when you read one, Keep up the good work, Fire
A little on the short side.
I liked the story but it was lacking some plot development and detail.
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