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byJenna Grey©
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by LeBroz05/17/06

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This poem was mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.

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by Anonymous08/07/06

A hot look at reality

Hey Jenna what a thought proving poem. Makes us all think just a bit.

You are a talented writer. Best wishes in the future and getting published

your friend
Bill D2

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