It would have received 100% had Craig not changed his name to Carl for one paragraph.
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Anonymous05/22/06
AGAIN?!
Sorry, I did that on the last story too. Deciding between names, and then my mind forgets which I chose.
Anyone know if there's any way to edit after submitting?
Love,
Is
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05/22/06
Your story was
mentioned in today's Author's Hangout New story review thread.
Excellent! Well written, and e3xtremly erotic! Great job!
by
Anonymous06/11/06
hot
I love older men. Their touch, the way they smell, the passion they put into making love. It's so much more orgasmic. Who would want a boy when you could have a man who could turn any simple conversation into something interesting and sexual without even making it obvious.
Good job! keep writing
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Anonymous03/28/07
very good
very sexy, i am an older man. very explicit. another one like this and i'll come in my pants.
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Anonymous05/20/07
Not Sexy Enough
Is it Carl or Craig?
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Anonymous06/02/07
Well written
The description of the slow easiness of their relationship is typical of the method by which an older gentleman is able to seduce a young maiden in his life. She completely discloses the willingness and desire of the young woman which must be present before a successful seduction can occur. Most girls, as opposed to young women, are not interested in a wrinkled face because of the embarrassment which they might feel if seen by their peers in public with an older man. The story discloses the author's sensitivity to the subtleties of a wonderful pairing.
The Craig/Carl name change, that happened for one tiny paragraph, was quite distracting. I've read the feedback here, and saw where you said "you forgot what name you used", however it seems hard to believe. Three paragraphs all next to each other went Craig, Carl, Craig just tht fast.
Overall the sex scenes weren't that bad.
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Anonymous03/04/15
Love this story
Love how sweet she is. Nothing better than sweet and sexy. Good story. Any chance for a part two?
English
Two Guys?? !!
It would have received 100% had Craig not changed his name to Carl for one paragraph.
AGAIN?!
Sorry, I did that on the last story too. Deciding between names, and then my mind forgets which I chose.
Anyone know if there's any way to edit after submitting?
Love,
Is
Your story was
mentioned in today's Author's Hangout New story review thread.
Erotisism at its best
Just lovely. As an older lover I really appreiated this.
great!
i enjoyed it a lot !
Really nice story
I love the may-december stories.
a very sexy tale
wonderful submission - I really enjoyed it
Sweet and Sexy
A really terrific read. You are a very talented author, Isabelle.
In praise of younger women and older men....
Well done, the relationship evolves nicely without complications.
Bravo!
Super great!
Excellent! Well written, and e3xtremly erotic! Great job!
hot
I love older men. Their touch, the way they smell, the passion they put into making love. It's so much more orgasmic. Who would want a boy when you could have a man who could turn any simple conversation into something interesting and sexual without even making it obvious.
Good job! keep writing
very good
very sexy, i am an older man. very explicit. another one like this and i'll come in my pants.
Not Sexy Enough
Is it Carl or Craig?
Well written
The description of the slow easiness of their relationship is typical of the method by which an older gentleman is able to seduce a young maiden in his life. She completely discloses the willingness and desire of the young woman which must be present before a successful seduction can occur. Most girls, as opposed to young women, are not interested in a wrinkled face because of the embarrassment which they might feel if seen by their peers in public with an older man. The story discloses the author's sensitivity to the subtleties of a wonderful pairing.
Well done!
Not bad, but distracting.
The Craig/Carl name change, that happened for one tiny paragraph, was quite distracting. I've read the feedback here, and saw where you said "you forgot what name you used", however it seems hard to believe. Three paragraphs all next to each other went Craig, Carl, Craig just tht fast.
Overall the sex scenes weren't that bad.
Love this story
Love how sweet she is. Nothing better than sweet and sexy. Good story. Any chance for a part two?
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