All Comments on 'Yu Ling Gets Punished'

Your story will be mentioned on the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Forum on lit's. Bulletin Board. ~ Red

Enjoyed your story, especially the remote vibe.

humbly,

slutty_jannelle

Certainly made my panties wet and lips throbbing....well done ;)

interesting choice of language usage you're not south east asian are you

Very hot. Would like to read more about Yu Ling being punished....

Damn this was goooooddddd.....

very descriptive writing. I wish she figured out who the mystery man was. I was also hoping that their interaction would have at least a few tender moments.

I enjoyed the teasing of the vibrating butt plug. The need for Yu Ling to stay silent in the lecture, as much a torment as the whip which followed. The balance of power, the question of who is in control, the question of who is really suffering are always the most fascinating elements in any D/s story.