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Very nice.
A man can learn from his mistakes.
I love stories where justice is done. Not the legal kind, but real justice were the punishment is equal to the pain.
This was very entertaining, a real man looking after his family, justice delivered to a genuine bad guy.
Keep up the great writing.
Welcome back
I missed the good DGH stories. Like this one.
A BIT SMOOTH.....
... except for the action near the end. One or two spelling/grammar mistakes but nothing that can't be corrected. Nice length but somewhat predictable; except I personally don't believe that three guys who had been promised a woman to fuck would then just as readily fuck a man!
You know DG, this was pretty good, but I wonder...
Where the folks that always vote for reconcilation at all cost are?
If this had been the wife that had screwed up like this and either got pregnant or brought the disease home, they would have been asking for your blood if you hadn't let them stay together and having the husband asking for her forgiveness because he dared get upset at her for cheating. I've often wondered why it is ok if the author writes the story as a wife kicking out a cheating husband and they are ok with it, but if the author chooses to make it the husband leaves a wife for cheating he's less of a man for it. I will never understand the lack of equal rights in those folks for the main characters. Either always root for them both to get back together or don't root for either, but don't pick on the male leads only.
But in this story, I thought it was a good story because, while yes the husband did screwed up major league, his life didn't stop because of the divorce. Yep he got drunk, cheated, and brought home a disease. And yes his wife divorced him for it regardless of what he said. But you didn't make it the end of the world for him, where if he couldn't have her then life wasn't worth living, and you didn't force them back together. You let them both move on with their lives and find someone else that they could be happy with.
Good story, and I'm glad to see it wasn't reconcile at all cost. It for me was more of the live and learn from your mistakes kinda of story.
-Risq
Your story
has been mentioned in today's Author's Hangout New Story Review.
Another Good one but I would expect no less!
There's just something about the stories you write DG. So, much like real life. I read an awful lot of fantacy on this site. Your stories just seem to hit home. Thanks again for another good read.
An avid fan
Thank you!!!
.....for this GREAT story!
BBE
Yup, another good story
And so, it pays to make friends where you can! A very good read. And it's done without a Navy Seal.
I thought the courtship was a little fast but it does happen, especially with a relative as the instigator.
Agood read and a very good ending.
Just think If H20 wrote this story
imagine what his --H20's version would of been....
the two ex cons fuck he wife who told her husband she just had to have lots a big cock.... and the hubby accepted it b/c HE did not wnat to hurt the little girl...
great story DG
and great post Risq.... once agan we agree on so much....
Great romance story
Great story DG as always. Looking forward to whatever genre you go to next.
Thanks for the entertainment
GREAT STORY
Risq said it all. Thanks for the story.
What the hell
DG:
It was worth a 2nd read 'cause it lost nothing in the re-reading. It is better then good, which is to say it is up to your usual. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I always love your work !!!
A fine tale where the ‘right’ things happen to the ‘right’ people. The good guys came out of it happy (even Lisa) and the bad guys literally ‘got it in the ass’. Anonymous in UK (now in Spain) who can’t believe that three guys who had been promised a woman to fuck would then just as readily fuck a man has forgotten that the three are ex cons who, while in prison, had grown accustomed to a masculine ass as a very acceptable substitute for a woman’s pussy. Above your usual fine standard! Pete.
Good one, dG
A gutsy romance that is not a girly girl sort of tale but still leaves ya warm and fuzzy.
Good work Dude!!
Great story
DG, I thought I had read them all, but...not
I thought this was one of your better ones. I especially liked the anonymous prose he used for proposing. Thanks for all of your work. You always will be one of the best!
Yep a well place argument -
Will convince a lot of doubters heh - a right placed to the head - a left placed to the ribs - it sometimes take a bit of discussion to close the meeting lol.
Another winner with enough reality to be scary heh
Excellent
A great tale. Shows that love can be found the second time around. Nice title.
Five Stars
THANK YOU FOR BEING MY FRIEND
through thick and lean, no good deed can ever go punished, TK U MLJ LV NV
Two dates????
He goes out with her twice and he's ready to marry her? Even though his first impression is that she's "a little overweight"? And the woman turns out to be so paranoid that she's crying that he didn't come in and fuck her after their first date? Every single Mother I've known is paranoid about protecting their kid. And not exposing them to a new man for a long time. This whole mess just went by at light speed. Even Robin Hood wasn't this crazy.
Loved it!
Five stars! Part of enjoying fiction is suspension of disbelief. Contrary to what one anonymous reviewer said, stranger things have happened than falling for someone right away. Good plot, good characterization. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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