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Here is where the good poetry lies:
He slips on his composure
Too late to even speak
As she saunters into the halo
Offered by muted streetlights
Your poem...
was mentioned in the New Poems Review!
S&D
Sensually
erotic, loved the picture you painted here
thanks for the read
purrrrrrrrrrr
"slips on composure" excellent line
loved the whole poem
g_g
So glad you're back!
All is now right with the (uni)verse. *kisses*
~Imp
Yum!
I'm not sure why, but this poem makes me think of the lyrical synopsis of a scene out of a Neil Gaiman story. Take that as you will, but it's intended as a high compliment.
rather hot and bothered
very sexy and sensual poem. the ability to seduce with words is a gift. and nary a blue word did you utter.
i'd love to quote a favorite line, but there are far too many. suffice it to say, you had me swooning over the description of a strappy shoe. sent shivers right through me. has great appeal to the sensibilites of a clothes horse.
:)
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