My only critique would be for more description into the sex the main character and the geek girl had, otherwise the buildup was fantastic. ^_^
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Anonymous06/05/06
Very neat joke sex
Well written, realistci and amusing
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Anonymous06/11/06
Fantastic!
I can't even tell you how much I enjoy your audio submissions. I re-listen to the "Teaching Carol" series on a regular basis, hoping there will be new additions. It's the combination of your voice and your attention to detail. Thanks so much, and please, keep up the great work!
You wrote and read this tale marvelously. I'm really looking forward to listening to your other works. Perfect for a commute! May I suggest that you introduce your work to Violet Blue/ Open Source Sex? Her podcast is not only the best "out there", but your work is in the calibre of art that she puts on her podcast. This particular tale would be perfect. Just a thought.
That story was absolutely excellent. I liked the way it ended without a long description of what happens next, but still leaving the reader with food for thought. I also liked the very light elements of dom/sub, too much of that usually gets in my way. Lastly, geek girls can be really hot IRL also, if you only know how to look... I was toying with the idea of printing the story and "accidentally misplacing" it at the SciFi bookstore near where I live!
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Anonymous11/02/07
amazing
it was amazing i dont usually enjoy audio with a mans voice but yours was excellent
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Anonymous11/13/07
geeks rule the planet
I love it! your writing is amazing, but the audio makes it so much better! the story is wonderful! thank you!
Funny and hot!!! I enjoyed the turning of control! Really really well-worded. What makes it even more funny for me, is that I myself am a bookseller...
There is only one little criticism: your audios would be even more impressive if you would speak a bit slowlier! It's not that I don't understand each word, it's just that sometimes as if you want to get finished with the story, a bit hasty... One could just dwell a little longer and better on the images you create if you would breath a little more in between... ;)
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Anonymous09/28/08
i'm the geek girl!
wow!
you're really amazing with the stories! I also love your voice. others around here have good stories, but their voice and delivery spoils it. but you deliver each story like a professional voice talent. the audio is also clean of white noise.
I hope that you'd keep these stories coming. they are really titillating that I listen to them over and over again.
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Anonymous09/29/08
Its Okay
it was realy good, listening to it, ...
the voice is realy entrancing, but it doent realy
make you cum though...
I don't normally listen to other guys. In fact given the title, I thought I'd hear a female voice. when I realized it was a guy, I almost turned it off, but you read very well and so i went with it. Agree with a previous poster, not masturbation material (I don't masturbate to guys anyway), but very entertaining, well read, and amusing. Not typical lit audio fodder, but a welcome change for the more cerebral listener. Well done.
The girl next door in you bookstore. Wow, what images you conjur up. Your voice is amazing; it helps the story gain realism. I'm a great Star Trek TOS fan so the thought of a hot busty babe with groovy knickers gets me quite excited. What about a sequal, I would love it.
Best wishes from England Zen.
English
Hot
My only critique would be for more description into the sex the main character and the geek girl had, otherwise the buildup was fantastic. ^_^
Very neat joke sex
Well written, realistci and amusing
Fantastic!
I can't even tell you how much I enjoy your audio submissions. I re-listen to the "Teaching Carol" series on a regular basis, hoping there will be new additions. It's the combination of your voice and your attention to detail. Thanks so much, and please, keep up the great work!
Very well done, Zen!
You wrote and read this tale marvelously. I'm really looking forward to listening to your other works. Perfect for a commute! May I suggest that you introduce your work to Violet Blue/ Open Source Sex? Her podcast is not only the best "out there", but your work is in the calibre of art that she puts on her podcast. This particular tale would be perfect. Just a thought.
The Final Frontier
That story was absolutely excellent. I liked the way it ended without a long description of what happens next, but still leaving the reader with food for thought. I also liked the very light elements of dom/sub, too much of that usually gets in my way. Lastly, geek girls can be really hot IRL also, if you only know how to look... I was toying with the idea of printing the story and "accidentally misplacing" it at the SciFi bookstore near where I live!
amazing
it was amazing i dont usually enjoy audio with a mans voice but yours was excellent
geeks rule the planet
I love it! your writing is amazing, but the audio makes it so much better! the story is wonderful! thank you!
Funny and hot!!! I enjoyed the turning of control! Really really well-worded. What makes it even more funny for me, is that I myself am a bookseller...
There is only one little criticism: your audios would be even more impressive if you would speak a bit slowlier! It's not that I don't understand each word, it's just that sometimes as if you want to get finished with the story, a bit hasty... One could just dwell a little longer and better on the images you create if you would breath a little more in between... ;)
i'm the geek girl!
wow!
you're really amazing with the stories! I also love your voice. others around here have good stories, but their voice and delivery spoils it. but you deliver each story like a professional voice talent. the audio is also clean of white noise.
I hope that you'd keep these stories coming. they are really titillating that I listen to them over and over again.
Its Okay
it was realy good, listening to it, ...
the voice is realy entrancing, but it doent realy
make you cum though...
I love it
Great story! Enjoyed it ;)
Excellent
I don't normally listen to other guys. In fact given the title, I thought I'd hear a female voice. when I realized it was a guy, I almost turned it off, but you read very well and so i went with it. Agree with a previous poster, not masturbation material (I don't masturbate to guys anyway), but very entertaining, well read, and amusing. Not typical lit audio fodder, but a welcome change for the more cerebral listener. Well done.
Geek girl sounds soooooo sexy
The girl next door in you bookstore. Wow, what images you conjur up. Your voice is amazing; it helps the story gain realism. I'm a great Star Trek TOS fan so the thought of a hot busty babe with groovy knickers gets me quite excited. What about a sequal, I would love it.
Best wishes from England Zen.
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