All Comments on 'The Sister's Seduction Ch. 02'

Like all the other stories I have read that you have written, this one is easily a 1000 out of a possible l00! Your story content is simply superb and second to none in meaningful eroticism. Please, keep up the good work and give us more? Thank you very much!

both of the stories in this chain are good and well told, but i think you may need to do a couple of drafts first, slow the pace of the story down a fewnotches , give more detail of the characters and take it from there!

all in all a good story

Wow..yah baby, what a fantasy! Please keep it coming.

I really like the stories. The way you describe it is pretty exciting and I think it makes the reader want more.

I also think that the pace is rather quick. I enjoyed the slow temptation of the first chapter, but it seems after the initial frolic, the cast is just going at it again and again with reckless abandon. That could be what you're aiming for, so if it is, it's working well.