All Comments on 'Giving It Up'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very nice!

Similar to a succubus story! Perhaps an elven, wood nymph!

sarussarusalmost 15 years ago
Awesome Read

Funny how you stumble on polished little gems without even looking for it :)

I was taken by surprise by your story, it's enchanting, innocent, and very sexy!

A big thanks for writing this, I'll be coming back for more :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Consider expanding on this story!

I enjoyed the story, and wanted more when I reached the end. A little more explanation of who and what she is, maybe more adventures, perhaps concluding with her meeting her match...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
That was perfect!

Ur the best author ever

Blade62Blade62about 11 years ago
one of the best stories like this I have read

you really pulled me into the world you created in this one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
unreal

a man that gives all he has to pleasure his LADY. hard to find in a REAL MAN. I KNOW this for a FACT! thank you for the story. makes me feel good inside. JULIA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This story is amazing! You're a gifted writer.

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
gives new meaning to

I want you

Calli06Calli06about 6 years ago
Exactly!

Isn't this exactly how most men would prefer to go!

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 2 years ago

Death by 'Snuu-Snuu'!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wasted my time. 1 ⭐️.

Bill S.

maxsteelemaxsteele5 months ago

Hey, since this man was a great man who actually wanted to pleasure his female partner and he might have be the bread winner for his family and a great father, maybe she should have spared him and just erase his memory. Instead when she needs to feed on someone to survive, she should instead choose a gang leader, a drug lord or a person who is terrorizing persons where they live and that if they suddenly disappear, everyone will be glad that they are gone.

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