All Comments on 'zmp~ tanka pebbles'

I,m not just slinging praise here, ( I dont suck up, lol) but other then the word "lay" seeming awkward, and it might be right, I dont know...besides all that

MET, I really really like this, a lot. I can feel it, like I am a pebble in motion from a careless foot. very nice work:)

maria

THANKYOU ZMA! I look everyday to see a ZMP and this is a very good ZMP! I like it alot, maybe allmost the best yet!!! PLEASE do some more like it!

since I've been reading on this site, have thorougly enjoyed your zen - and have learned from it.

time-i always enjoy reading your poems

ZMP me, i agree i liked this one a lot

thanks for sharing :)

divine inspired....much wisdom ...in such a small form..does it get any better...you are blessed with this one...big sigh...blue