Fragility

What a Punk

That's all I really have to say. Well-written tale, but only Brits and Republicans like Cuck stories.

reality

Those nazis making negative comments are unfamiliar with reality. Your story has the ring of truth. The marriage ended the way many marriages do - with a whimper.

There are plenty of people with enough self-esteem to try to survive the infidelity of a cheating partner. I'm certain that many marriages do survive a one-time thing as described in this story. On the other hand, that very infidelity may well cause the breech in the dam that eventually erodes into the disolution of the marriage anyway. I've seen it happen both ways.

Those nazis who automatically declare the husband to be 'a wimp' and condemn the author and his story probably have serious emotional issues in their own marriages. Their personal self-worth is dependent upon their ownership of their wives' cunts.

Believe it or not, nazis, there are mature and thoughtful people who abhor infidelity but still are willing to try to work at the committment they made "till death do us part".

With much effort and caring, sometimes a marriage can survive the infidelity. And as in this story, sometimes it cannot.

Can't Believe

I wasted my time on this GARBAGE.

realistic, marriage doomed when grief not handled

My rating is based on my love for the authors realism, not my love for the characters. They both were way too eager to put this behind them without fully processing. She has to tell him in the car, but then can't discuss further until home. He is so eager to forgive that he takes some of the blame. [Apparently] neither feels the need to tell the wife of her husband's "needs". So they say all is forgiven, but the forgiveness was meaningless.

So the grief eats his marriage. And she thinks that the marriage must not be that important to him because he didn't fight. And their indifference reinforces the spiral downward. The marriage was doomed with the date of death dependent on his job search. She started the descent, but he kept it going down. He should have either: 1) Kicked her out right away; or 2) Made her earn his confidence back. This would include getting tested for STDs, seeing an individual counselor, and perhaps joint counseling. It sounds like he needs some self-esteem counseling. Some volunteer work for her with people who have truly unmet needs who be good as well. Quit her job if that what she thinks is her problem, but only after she takes responsibility for her own actions.

The saddest part is it didn't sound like either spouse learned a thing from their troubles. They both just run away.

Unbelievable

Lemme recap:
"Oh by the way I fucked your friend this afternoon."
"Oh gosh dear that's really upsetting, give me all the gory details."
"I fucked him! Best sex ever, and I'll do it again if it pleases me!"
"No you can't, you promised."
"Oh all right, please forgive me."
"Ok you're forgiven, g'night dear, love you."
"Thanks, love you too, nitey-nite."
Then they wonder why the thrill, trust, and love went out of their marriage? These people have all the depth of snail slime. He's a spineless wimp, no wonder he can't keep his women. She's a self centered cheating whore, who'll fuck any sob story with a cock, until her looks are gone, and nobody will want her any more.

this story is blaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

im seeing where other people are saying this story is so real. where do they live? the writer has the wife tell hubby she fucked someone else, like she had spent too much money or a hat. He gets a little mad, but he forgives her quickly. this is BULLSHIT. i know of no one that would get over it that easy. the rest of it is so boring, i just skipped over it at first. I had to make my self go back and read it.

The elephant in the room

So let me see...she tells him she was unfaithful, and he asks for details...which she gives in tantalizing details...and then he immediately forgives her...riiight... You just don't sweep anything like this under the rug and go on as before like nothing happened. they needed counseling. they needed to set boundaries. they needed forgiveness. they needed to work on this marriage, but they didn't. what a useless story. the sex was good, but the story was empty.

once she slept with another it was over

when another enters your bedroom things change.that other person will be in bed with you.

ah, the fragility of love and family!

"Wait, let me get this straight... You be tellin' me you's been fuckin' around on me?"....
"Yes, I am so sorry, honey....If you want to di...."
"Wait, wait, wait... Before I think about divorce or not.... tell me how big he is, damn whore! Tell me all the positions he, or THEY, took you. You like sucking and swallowing, don't you, something you never do it for me, you slut....
"God damn whore!, tell me how many orgasms you had with him, with them? How often do they fuck you?.... I bet you came home many times, letting me suck and fuck you right after they had had their way with you, whore!.... No wonder I many times thought you was so WET... and I thought, Jesus H. Christ Lord, ain't she ready for me... she be drippin' wet! Ain't I a lucky bastard!.... Now, I am finding out you be fuckin' around on me!
"Hmmmmpt! Unless you tell me all the details, I gonna kick your sorry cheating ass out! Start tellin' me all of the details, THEN I might see if I could forgive you... You better not leave out all those gross things you be doing, you hear? I want all of it!" ,p>
She hesitated a bit,,, and, then, what the heck, right? He wanted all the juicy details, how many cocks, how large, and how much they deposited in her, right?
After she started detailing her activities, he had this spaced-out countenance.... She realized he's jerking himself!
"Pervert... you fucking pervert@! And I thought you was angry at me, wantin' a divorce... But here you was usin' me, listenin' to my sufferin' at the hands of all tohse ugly, physical men,,, and you was jerkin'!"
"Oh, come on, honey.... Give me a chance here! I find those positions they used you, how they bent and fucked you, and how much they deposited in you... I find all those so erotic! Imagine this: you was walkin' out of a motel room, drippin' wet and you came home to me! Hmmmmmmm!
"Anyway, honey, if I don't divorce you, would you keep doin' it, fuckin' those men, that is,,, and coming home to me and letting me have you afterwards?,,, please?"
Ah,,, the FRAGILITY of love and marriage and respect! And such a big-hearted, understanding, and loving husband,,, it's precious!! lol

I thought this was well done

Not all characters have to whip out a .357 and turn someones skull into fine red mist, this seemed realistic. An effort at recommitting, with the sadly predictable result. Different and I liked the style.

So sad

this story was so well laid out and so well written that it could break one's heart. Just about at the top of the category.

awh

What you just did to your characters was exactly what you say that this pair didn't have or need. You broke their trust... Reread what you wrote... To call a car a vehicle doesn't change its nature.. Do you get it? Strange what excuses people create for pretending that love and trust isn't necessary...Cheers Yoron.

Ah hmmm.

Just not believable; no man would accept that kind of behavior and amount of disrespect from his "loving" wife. No real man that is. No, it didn't need a 357 to resolve the situation, but she invited a third into their marraige, then defied him to do anything about it. Everything after that is smoke and mirrors in an alternate universe where the husband clearly must have had his nuts removed soon after birth and the wife brainwashed of any sense of morality or decency.

This isn't a loving wife...Just typical yawn

This is just one in a million dull stories in the loving wife section. This site really needs a cheating sections. When i read the description of loving wife. It never said anything about dull cheating....and the typical guy being calm the whole time.(never need that before -_-')

I have to ask.

If they had that premarital agreement why he kept her? She admitted she did it on purpose. She admitted if the opportunity came up again she would do it again. She enjoyed the raunchy desriptions of the sex she gave him. She actually hated her husband, not loved him. She was in a marriage of convience and he was not smart enough to realize this. So the drug out a dysfunctional marriage three more years before they walked away. Had he divorced her in the first act peossibly his life would have been much better much sooner. Reconciliation at any cost is never the best choice.

wasted 3 years

she came clean and what of the guy's wife. a call should have been made by her with apology to his wife. it begs the question, how many other before the event and after?
it was dead between them and sometimes that works out

Sadly, this story is very realistic

In many situatins the slow death of the the intimacy is the real reason for the final divorce. Oftentimes, the dramtic cheating just illustrates the existing situation of "dead men (and women) walking" in dead in all respects -but in name -marriages.
As an aside -I was quite irritated by the self rightious accusatory tone of the cheating wife - who was OFFENDED by her husband request to find out exactly what happened, and I was equally annoyed by the wimpy APPOLOGIES of the cheated husband for asking...Geez...where did you scrape from this piece of fantacy?

Way to much lost time, they had an agreement she

broke it, broke her marriage vows, and destroyed the marriage. Divorce should have happened immediately and the other person named in the suit and an alienation of affection suit filed. Being PC never works it just makes the ending worse. I didnt feel good about myself so I fucked him while you were outside, oh yeah, what does that say about the man she is supposed to love? Talk about a brain dead piece of trash!

your writings are to fuck over the hubby

first thing he should have done was to go back and kick her lover ass and then her ass was next.you talk this pretty talk about she let him and she get in his face and talk shit to the hubby.he should've thrown her ass thrown a window.you world isn't the real world.you write like some man with no balls.

My comment is really for two stories.

Just discovered this story after reading the just-published story "The Qualities of Intensity" by the same author. Both are quite similar, in fact. But the comments are turned off in the new story, so there is no way to comment except by going to an older story (which is almost the same in so many ways). In "Fragility," our heroine reveals her cheating on the way home from a party at a posh house. In "Intensity" our hero actually observes the cheating at a party at a posh house (but does nothing to stop it although he had a chance to intervene before the fucking) and the wife confirms her cheating not long after they arrive home (actually on awakening the next morning). In both cases, the other guy is well-built and athletic, and hung/masterful/creates better orgasms in the wife. In both cases the wives are hardly apologetic; I would characterize their attitudes as defiant rather than contrite, despite the initial tears and temerity. Both obviously disrespect their hubbies. Both clearly don't value fidelity or their marriages based on their attitudes. In both cases, the "heroes" are passive, weak, almost apologetic. In "Intensity" the husband at least leaves and divorces right away, but he is regretful and almost feels it's his fault (that's right, let's blame the victim). In "Fragility" we see a similar pathos but it takes 3 years for the broken marriage to finally die. There was no attempt at counseling in either story (other readers have mentioned this as well). There was no background or character development in either story; maybe it would have required an extra page or two but it might have helped the reader to better understand the behavior of the cheater. In both stories there was the ring of truth -- the author suggests there really is a lot of truth in one or both, and I wonder if that is figurative or if it is personal? But the lack of credulity in the reaction of the husband, the bland acceptance, in "Fragility" just does not rate a 100% score. The reasons given for the cheating by the wife (Alex) in "Intensity" suggest she is only concerned with herself and not thinking of her partner. Neither wife considered the possibility of transmitting an STD -- they both fucked bareback. Alcohol was a factor (they say it is a factor in more than 50% of auto accidents also). Oh, yes, and both stories end quite unhappily. The writing and grammar as well as the figures of speech are well-done, and for that I rate it 75% (I did for the other story also).

Both stories are poor excuse for wimp males

and this author needs help. The plot lines suck in both stories and the reader ends up disliking both characters. What a waste of time.

sort of emotionless

the only real emotion in this story was the contempt of the wife when she told her husband that her lover was better in bed and that if she felt like doing him again she would. I would have gone after the lover, told his spouse, I would not have apoligized for asking questions, and based on her contempt I would have divorced her. pretty unrealistic story really.

Pussy!

I read the first few paragraphs and we have a real pussy wimp on our hands.I don't know if I will finish it or not.

Weak plot, weak characters

If she strayed so easily and his response was a timid as it was, they never were in a comitted marriage. There was no one in this story to identify with, just two sleazy weak stupid people. anon jerry

Entirely implausible

"I was wrong to keep at you, to make you describe all the details of what happened. I feel ashamed and embarrassed for putting you through that."

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

A sad end to what was love.

I can understand divorce but loosing contact completely with an ex that was such a big part of life for 13 years or more seems cold. They didn't part as enemies just as losers of love.

A too sad tale that actually rings false

I've skimmed some of the comments and I agree that this marriage was over before she cheated. I also have a very hard time seeing the "reconciliation" that took place in what seemed an eye blink. He's sorry for pushing for details? First I don't think I'd want them... but if I did, I deserve them! The woman has cheated and she OWES me whatever I think I need to get past or help get out.

Frankly, I think the details are just that, help in getting from where you were emotionally to where you've discovered the marriage is. She was done. It was over for her and his "forgiveness" just meant more pain for both.

Having said all that, it was very well written and I'll be looking for more of the author's writing.

unfucking believeable

This story sucked big time. He lived with the worthless whore for three more years. What a wimp!

Vehement reactions expected

I, for one, found this story very concise and extremely realistic. People who put alot into their marriage often do try to reconcile. Sometimes it works, but most of the time it dosen't. Was something wrong before the incident? Yes, but it needed to be talked out or temptation resisted. One cannot take an act of infidelity back after it has occured. Most of the time, as in this story, it is something that just hovers. The final death of the marriage is not hate, but indifference. That is what happened.

Great story!!!!

marriage destroyed

hubby let lover go free.wimpy.

Your best

2nd read a year later confirms 1st impression. You should write more with this insight and expand on the theme

should heve left her at the...

side of the road then gone back to the party and monkey-stomped the other guy

I wonder?

If this woman even gave a thought as to what she had actually done to this marriage, I never found anything in the story that mentioned it. I also find that in real everyday life that the same thing seems to be the same way. It doesn't look to good for marriage in these times, or even these stories. R.T.

The end sequence

had that marvelus contradiction required of all dramatic actions, it was surprising yet in the terms you'd set up, inevitable. And delicately observed. It's difficult to write about ... nothing, the absence of what had been. In some ways a whole new take on how things can go. Fragility indeed.

The wife cheats and then gets mad because he wants to know how it happened and what they did? It wasn't till he pointed out that her actions effects not only her but him as well as their marriage that she got a clue.

But he forgave, but couldn't forget and the damage was done. I think that was the most natural part of the story.

And really this guy's wife is described as "sick" and he is off screwing his friend's wife? What a man!!

What a wimp....

If my wife told me something that nature while driving home. I would have put her ass out on the side of the road, turned the car around and returned to Rod's house where I would have stomped the shit out of his ass. What man would slowly dissolve over three years before divorcing thie slut?

The story could never happen.

Women excel at sneaky sex. A day later, she would have not given it a second thoughtl.

She would have never told her husband because women know that telling the truth is never the right thing to do. All women lie and it is second nature for a women to lie.

Even if she would have told, he was an ass for it to lead to a divorce and the ending was very unsatisfactory.

Because the story is near impossible and because of the unpleasant ending I could only give it a 3*** rating.

GOSSAMER WINGS CANT FLY FAR

but how they can glide, enough to be driven away. TK U MLJ LV NV

WIMP

She screws another guy and not only acts like she should be getting some kinda award or medal for it, but also that its at least partially hubbie's fault. Then she just orders him around (demands they discuss it on her terms) gets angry cause he's "prying" about the details, gets angry cause he's not acting like she wants so she rants she might do it again, and makes hubbie feel like he should be apologizing to her for among other things spoiling her good feelings about the mercy fuck she gave. Makes your skin crawl that hubbie accepted this for 3 seconds much less 3 years.

Actions, Words, and the Mind.

No matter what you do or say, the Mind sometimes doesn't except the action, of the love one your with.

wtf

why are the husbands in these stories so... feminine? not just this author, but almost all of them? feminine and submissive. i know a few of the authors are canadian, so i can see what their problem is, but as for the others? i dont get it.

Boring!

This wimp story was a waste of time! He wasted 3 more years on a worthless slut before trashing her ass? Unbelieveable... 0 stars

I agree with Hawkeye

it'sd just another Fag WACC story, and this husband is happy to get his creampie, all that BS between the two of them is just that. So when she fucks the next guy, the husband can get his sloppy seconds on the spot instead of driving home.

Another asshole

Another wimp husband and a cheating wife. Three years wasted after the wife strayed. The husband should be shot.

FALSE ADVERTISING

The subtitle of your story is, "A wife strays with dire results..."
What dire results?

The only result of this story is that the marriage ended with a whimper, not a bang.

A quick summary:

Wife was the one who insisted on fidelity as a prerequisite for marriage.
Wife willingly cheats.
Wife volunteers the information.
She's not afraid to tell hubby she might even do it again, if she wants.
They go to bed and they 'forgive each other', though she tells him that describing her betrayal ruined the memory of it for her (er... she deserved to have that memory enshrined as her own private moment???).
They fuck the same night.
Time passes and they divorce.

A (truncated) passage of the story that I really disliked:
Susan: "Any more questions?"

"Yes, I have another question. Are you going to fuck him again?"

I knew before the sound of my voice finished dying in the room that I had made a mistake, lost my self-control and damaged my dignity badly. I cursed myself silently with all the despair of being unable to take it back.

Er, excuse me, but what the fuck??? He has no right to be hurt and indignant that his wife stepped out on him? He has no right to hear from her own mouth what her intentions in the future might be?

All I can say is, the marriage was dead LONG before the day described. She did it because she didn't respect the condition she made herself, so what she was saying was that a condition of the marriage was that HE was never to step out.

She didn't respect him at all either. For it to happen on the spur of the moment, even drunk, means that she had to have subconsciously considered what she would do if the situation ever arose. Even a total drunk will adhere to their basic moral positions.

She didn't respect the marriage enough to fear the consequences of her admission.

She didn't consider his feelings in the equation at any point until almost the end of page one, where he stops her from walking out in a huff, just telling him she just might fuck around again. He points out that as he is married to her, so her actions DO affect him.

No bloody wonder these characters split. There was never any reason to respect him. She did not hold her husband in awe, which is what happens both ways in a healthy marriage. A couple, even after getting comfortable, still MAKES THE EFFORT to take notice of the things they love about the partner. Which, by the way, the male character did near the beginning of the tale.

So this was a frustrating read.

To those who say it's realistic, even true to life, then I can only say I feel sad for you and your relationship.

And lastly, it WAS false advertising. Dire results??? did Rod get ANY comeuppance for instigating this betrayal? Did his wife find out? Did Susan even get a redressing? None.

Cack.

Pile of rubbish

Nothing more need be said, the title of this post summons this failure up in a nutshell.
I want the time back that I wasted reading this pile.

A Little Boring.

Well written but just boring.

Sad ending ....

Despite the style, the ending was just ....... sad.

yep. sounds like real life to me.

Oh, not the setup for the cheating - that would have likely taken more time; but the end of the marriage, sort of a slow-motion drift into ruin, yep, that is what happens. I've lived it. No reason to forgive cheating, ever. Cut your losses ASAP, go on with more productive things. Fragility indeed. All of civilization is a prettily dressed house of cards.

Great

Reality - except where he has to apologize for making her tell him all the facts. A sloppy cunt kills another marriage. 5