by fantasticpussy
And then she died from aids and so did all the dumbasses who fucked her after the infected guy. End of a moronic story. Only hope the writer is one of the ones who fucked her afterwards so he doesn't live to write more of this crap.
Not as hot as "Threesome", but far from the worst I've read.
Don't pay any attention to Anonymous. He obviously can't tell fantasy from reality, and probably shouldn't be reading erotica in the first place. He should know that constructive criticism will foster and encourage stories he likes, whereas a flaming diatribe like he wrote is more likely to drive off potentially good authors before they even get started.
So please, keep writing. "Threesome" was very good, "Bound to the Tree" was good, and I look forward to reading your next story. Certainly better than the stories I've tried to write, which would more than likely be shot down even faster by people too cowardly to even sign a handle.
Dont you mean dressed slutty? After all, that's the whole theme isn't it? Can't say it was crap, but can't say it was all that good either.
I love Nonconsent stories but not this one. There wasn't one ounce of eroticism to make this even remotely interesting.
Sounds an awefull like a story written by slutkathy
"nicoles bound experience"
WOW some of you assholes take this stuff way to serious. It's just a fucking story. That being said it's not as good as Fantasticpussy's other story but it's not bad. It could uses more of story line and detail but give her a break. I think she shows promise.
The idea is excellent, but the language is immature. "Watermelons" and "Milkbags" when referring to breasts in that context take away from the reading.
Very cool story I would love to read more of what happens to her being controlled by both her boyfriend and his other girl friend more out side bondage and spankings !
Hi, so I copied this on wattpad, gave you all the credit. If you want me to take it down let me know. You can find me on wattpad with the username @forgottencharm
When are we going to get another story? Better yet, a story with some more pics of you!