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by vampiredust05/21/06

I enjoyed

reading this poem of yours. Loved seeing the world through this speakers eyes.

p.s your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

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by MissBri05/23/06

Damn.

That's the stuff... reminds me of Rumblefish.

"California’s like a beautiful, wild girl on heroin... who's high as a kite, thinkin' she's on top of the world, not knowing she's dying even if you show her the marks."

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by LeBroz02/25/08

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Hard gritty edge in looking at the world through her dying eyes.

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by LeBroz03/07/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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