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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/21/06

I liked this far more

than fixation. Perhaps because the narrator, in his desire for his subject, has shrugged off disdain. Technically solid. I like the lips to lips whispering image, especially.

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by LeBroz05/22/06

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I also like this piece better
It leaves it to the reader
To fill in the blanks with his own perversions;
The power of suggestion so well used.

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by Selkie105/25/06

provocative, sensual

with that sense of fun that makes it all so lovely ... liked this a lot

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by sassynyc05/29/08

mmm...pick a perversion and fill it in

perverse and not the least bit lewd. just suggestive enough to imply full capability of lasciviousness. imagine that ;)

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