All Comments on 'Broken'

by creamscream

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Total crap

And that is being kind

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
the night before

I would have liked it better if you had gone into more derail about the first night.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
boring

nothing erotic about this. just garbage

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Yawn

I agree with the other people... there's nothing erotic about this story.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years ago
Thanks

Your story was mentioned on the New Story Thread on Literotica’s Bulletin Board - Author’s Hangout forum ~ Thanks for the read ~ Red

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Were you trying...

To make a completely horrible story? I mean, you give a back story that could have been told a little more, maybe give us something to work with. You went by too quick with everything. If you're going to write something, try not to do it in between jerking off on other peoples, good stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Finally a true NC story

I hope you continue enjoyed her rough treatment. There is nothing fluffy about forced sex and it shouldn't be written that way. But a little more detail of her abduction, his intentions and rape scenes would make story better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice story, bad writing.

Though the story could have been good, the way it was written is pretty poor. I think it would be in your benefit to rewrite it, and perhaps get someone to help you along the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You're kidding, right?

Just out of curitosity, being a woman who loves a good forced sex fantasy, what was this about? the premise is okay, but it reads like you started it, then got tired, or bored writing it and just ...stopped

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
MMM is all i can say.

i dont care what you guys say, that story was one of the best things i have ever read. i though it was written very well, and i loved the whole story from begining to end. BRAVO!!

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