Hi. This is easily one of the best stories, in any category, that I have read on this site. It seems that you are probably a very nice person in real life, because this comes across very strongly in writing, your description of your characters and their feelings. Some of the best things - you didn't initially bring the colour thing into the story and it was some time before I worked out who was who; You didn't describe the woman as a definition of her bra size, I truly hate that; and you ended the story, instead of just leaving it hanging. Many authors on here seem to get bored with the story after they have written the sex bit and just drop the tale! So thank you for an excellent story. Regards, Michael
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GREAT!
Will there be more on this couple?
Romance erotica galore oh my..........
Very nice romantic erotic storyline. Please add more soon.
Absolutely excellent!
Hi. This is easily one of the best stories, in any category, that I have read on this site. It seems that you are probably a very nice person in real life, because this comes across very strongly in writing, your description of your characters and their feelings. Some of the best things - you didn't initially bring the colour thing into the story and it was some time before I worked out who was who; You didn't describe the woman as a definition of her bra size, I truly hate that; and you ended the story, instead of just leaving it hanging. Many authors on here seem to get bored with the story after they have written the sex bit and just drop the tale! So thank you for an excellent story. Regards, Michael
LOVE IT, keep going!!!!
Hello,
do you plan to update soon?
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