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Daddy and Little One Ch. 08

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by Anonymous

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by txrosenaynay06/08/06

my

my my my...loved it...respectfully fan in Texas naynay

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by Anonymous06/08/06

One

of the most erotic stories on Lit.

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by Anonymous06/08/06

One

of the most erotic stories on Lit.

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by Anonymous06/08/06

Oh my...

bronzeage, I'm so loving every word of your "Little One" Series. It's sensuous, romantic, and so very erotic. Your writing is perfectly wonderful.

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by Anonymous06/08/06

Hot!!

This is my first comment on your Little One story but I've been following it chapter by chapter. This is so hot and I love the suspense. There is a dream-like quality to your writing, very sensuous and hypnotic. My pussy is creamy wet.

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by Anonymous06/10/06

Mmmmm

I can't wait until the next chapter is ready!! The first 7 are hot, hot, hot. Makes me wish I were Little One!

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by Anonymous06/12/06

morrrrrrrrrre

i think this is a fantastic story more plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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by Anonymous06/14/06

You're the best, Daddy

I told you so. ;o)

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by 06/07/07

Hot!

Very hot.

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by Jeanx2storm04/10/08

sensual and in the moment

Chapters 1-8 delight me. Your writing is delicious. I plan to savor the remaining chapters at my leisure. It is a treat to find a writer with grace- as in the ability to make your characters realistic, capture their beauty, and delight in the sensous minute details which made me catch my breath and imagine that I was part of your story.

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