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you are such a tease
i have been following this story and cant wait for the next chapter. i hope that daddy and little one will finally do the deed but i fear that you will continue to tantalize the readers. either way this is still a great story.
Just Gets Better And Better
The lack of names, only titles, makes it easier to keep up with the characters. The still undetermined age
is very exciting and interesting. The reader can make up his or her own mind, I like that. I voted this and
other chapters 100%. The length of each chapter and the suspense at the end is just right. Do continue
and don't change a thing about your characters, they are nice people and I find their thoughts to be much
as I would think anyone in a simular situation would be. Again, very nice and exciting. Richar
Very...
good...well written and i really like this story and how well you've put it together and keep the chapters coming quickly...i hate waiting for months for a story to be finished or one little chapter at a time over months and months...lots of life in this story to go...can't wait to see where you go with it*smile*...respectfully fan in Texas naynay
very hotttttttttttttttttt
oh goddddddd....very very hottttttttttttttttttttt...cant wait for chapter 10..giggles
patti
tease, tease, tease...
I can't wait till the next chapter...I'm already wet with anticipation!! I love your stories, please keep them comming quickly. The only suspence I want to experience is them actually doing the deed, not waiting for a chapter!
Amazing
This story is wonderful. Please keep writing.
please more
I Love this story so much its so hot! please please write more i cant wait to see what happens next!
Please
Pleas Update soon!! I absolutely love your story and keep checking every day to see if you've updated yet. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Mmmm
I want more :)
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