All Comments on 'Babysitting the Baumgartners Ch. 01'

this story rocks in so many ways. Can't wait for next chapter!

Selena,

Gee...I knew there was a reason I always liked BabySitters. What a lovely story, nice flow, and seems to hold the promise of more later.

What goes on in my mind about babysitters does not seem to be the case on this story.

Great little babysitter story, seductively written..nice to see the Mrs. as the aggressor for a change!

The wife as the seducer? Good move! Hope to keep reading more chapters about this.

...but surely you can't intend leaving it there? This is an excellent opening chapter, a slow burn which builds up the tension in a very believable manner (good dialogue, too).

My only criticism - and it's not that strong - is that your protagonist doesn't seem all that shocked to see Doc B jacking off on the balcony, despite the general air of innocence she exhibits throughout the rest of the tale.

Still shivering.

I agree that I NEED to know what happenned next.

So well written that I cold feel the warmth of the sun and the heat from their oily, sweaty bodies. Can't wait for more!

You're very, very good at this. Excellent as always. Keep it up.

Nicely done, Selena! More, please!

Wonderful story, just wish it had gone on one more page. Very sensual.

....S-Des

have to agree...interesting story so far...many diffent story lines here to work off of. look forward to them. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

your story reads really smoothly~ thanks ~i can't wait to keep reading!

The sand, the wind, the smells, Veronica's skin... the rich word pictures and evocative language take me there. You tell a story SO well Selena. Thanks!

i loved the story love to hear more

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm..........I've only just read the first installation of 'babysitting', and I'm feeling the tap, tap, tap of my OWN femaleness beginning to pulsate......yummy. I can't wait to read the rest. I'm a straight, 'atypical mother' who's also a writer and none of that matters right now because I HAVE to get to psrt two...and it's ALL YOUR FAULT, Selena, you bad girl you.

Alexx

I found "Baumgartners" a year ago, read every chapter, loved them all and then -- forgot how to find them again and -- forgive me, your name. By chance I've found them and you and they seem like long lost friends.

They are all wonderful! Thank you.

male or female, the height of sexual arousal must be equal, I'm standing at attention, still!

keep em cummin er I mean coming!

thank you Selena_Kitt. Great start to the series and better with each chapter. Do you have an e version of a compilation? I am stockpiling the reading i like for an extended trip to northwestern Siberia. It is as advertised lol. I think your stories on here would add a few degrees to the temperature in my room. Whining yes but this place sucks to download multiple files. Thanks again, I am going right back to your stories list.

Brad

If you have a wish list or several for Santa please let me know. I am close enough to hand deliver.

it is a great and sensual story. I hope there will be another chapter soon, as its hot and has many options for the future. Thanks.

What a fun story of waking sensuality.

Looking forward to what happens next.

It starts out great with a realistic plot and then it gets a bit less so, but in a good way. Can't wait to read the rest.

Veronica knows her ass will soon be on display if she wears a micro bikini--what a shock. I anticipate she will look great and invite much touching. Boy you sure make the reader salivate for more.

Yeah, they're all going to have a great vacation, nice that the wife is part of the seduction. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Your story is as hot as the Key West sun. Mrs B and an unwitting Veronica putting on a show for horny Dr B. Very nice.

Mmmm, this start is as yummy as Veronica and Mrs. B. Can't wait to see where this goes...