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more of the same please
Exellent story, hope you continue with it. keep writing.
DAMN THAT WAS HOT...
WELL WRITTEN AND HOT...SAYS IT ALL
A damn hot story
Many Feathers:
You've done a whale of a job on telling a hot erotic story and doing it well. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Loved it
Great story.. I loved it..I hope to see more
I'd have to agree with the title
What an agreeable straight man fantasy, being thrown in with two pairs of bisexual females in open relationships--yeah right. LOL. Nevertheless, this was a hot and well-written story. Best, Ken
Agree
Yes, it is completely "Unbelievable" but very well written and enjoyable!
Great story - and funny
Great and funny story, well written, as always.
I like your stories and your style
Looking for more
temperature
too many degrees. can't cum. too hot. can only dream.
Just fantastic!
Very, very well done! Thank you!
need an editor
I know some of your readers find this story "well written," but it's one of the worst written and badly edited stories I've read here for a long time. There are words that you simply make up (languishly) and others that don't mean what you seem to think they do. The sentence structure throughout is so bad it's not even funny—just pathetic.
I seriously hope you'll find someone who'll go over your work before you submit it.
bound to end in trouble
especially when the women get tired of him and just want to be together themselves.....basically a bunch of fuck slut whores never to be trusted....his best bet is to get out and go find a decent woman ....and leave this bunch of sluts in the gutter where they belong.....
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