All Comments on 'Alice With A Twist Ch. 2'

OMG!!! that was fuckin great! i live for stories like this and by the time i was done with chapter two i had never been so wet before! i got one question....do u have anything else to read???

An interesting take on a well known story, really inventive especially with Needledum & Needledee. I know you had fun writing this. Hope we get to hear what happens when Alice catches up with the White Rabbit !