All Comments on 'Babysitting the Baumgartners Ch. 02'

This is one HOT fantasy!! I love how innocent and yet sexually curious she is... so easy to lead down the path to corruption. I can't wait to see what you do with this!

I want to be the Doc!!! Having both of those hot .... very hot pussies there for the taking!!!!! Oh please continue this story!!!

very hot....can't wait for the next installment...mmmmm

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the next installment.

Love your story and very eager to read more!

I often find the "talk dirty" style of dialogue forced and redundant, but it seems entirely appropriate here, given that Doc and his wife believe themselves to be alone.

In many ways, the ball is now in Veronica's court: she can act offended, or drop hints that she'd be willing to join them. I suspect the process by which she makes her decision will make for interesting reading.

Please please please tell us what happens next.

Now I'm completely hooked. Don't take too long to get to the next chapter . . . PLEASE!!!

....S-Des

very cock-hardening - can't wait to read more...

Absa-fucking-lutely amazing!

I'm goingto cum!!!!

I'm not sure I can take another chapter... right now!

After I cum, I'm going to shave my pussy. MORE; GIVE ME MORE! Apparently I'm not going to get much done today.....

You made me cum hard! The first shot landed on my chest, then I just kept cumming! I'll come back when I recover...

wasn't sure where this was going in ch 1, but sure do now in this ch..,,,,very exciting!

very nice, very hot

While Veronica was shocked the reader knows her desire to be fucked by Doc has her pussy leaking. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Hello! I just started writing Erotica and researching/reading various erotica to learn how to get better at it. I know you've been writing for awhile, and I've heard of you before, but this is the first time I'm reading your work. I just wanted to say I think you're awesome and I hope to be awesome at it someday :)

Oh oh caught again, the little peeping thomasina! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.