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by LeBroz05/25/06

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A sad piece revealing depths of despair and self-doubt. Well done.

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by impressive05/25/06

Powerful, Jett!

I really felt it. *kisses* ~Imp

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by vampiredust05/25/06

Good

but needs pauses. There is a lot for the reader to take in here, adding pauses (via commas) would help without detracting from the rythmn.

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