All Comments on 'First Time Out'

I loved the buildup as you explained what was going through her head as the story progressed, rather than just describe the sex.

And it sure didn't hurt that the sex was smoking hot. Please tell me there's another chapter or six in the works.

Anaother wonderful 'Milene'- story, as only Milene knows how! Great build, beautiful non-equial sex, and a sizzling description of the submissive pleasure of serving.

Top marks!

Fucking hot is more like it. The characters were so fully developed and the scene so beautifully set, that I truly became engulfed by this sizzling story. Milene is one talented storyteller!

Thanks, Milene. You are a very good writer, and your descriptions of lesbian sex acts are just terrific.

Doesn't get any better than this. You're killing me.

That was awesome! A true masterpiece of erotic fiction. I hope you never stop writing stories like that, because I'm addicted and I want to read more and more and more.

A delicious story in every respect1 Very, very, well done!

this story had me spanking my pussy,3 fingers in my hole, and 4 cums !!!!

fantastically done; a Real lesbian sex story. tell it like it is, Honey!

wow, i was amazed of how as u read the story u can visiurise the action. ALso good use of the charather ideas

You made me wet my panties!!!

So bad, so in need of being punished. I'm envious. Oh, for opportunity to be Milene and have my ass spanked while serving a vicious bitch who forces me to please her.

This story is a rare pleasure. Whatever you do, don't stop writing.

Wow. Love the way you build the story and the tension, and then how she totally dominates you. If only I could be in your place!

I LOVE (!!) reading your stories, they're just so everything. I'm really curious about what happens in the future regarding the bartender though! You're a terrific writer and just catch all the little details that add so much fire to the things everyone else seems to miss. Don't ever stop, please.

I work in retail, at a small mom and pop type store. Well it's during business hours, and I got bored so I started reading.

WOW. I got off twice through my jeans reading this. SO hot and realistic and well written. May you be satisfied as much as you just satisfied me.

As one of these men that enjoy lesbian porn - especially the kinky sort I'd like to add my praise of this story. A lovely mix of hardcore action and a well constructed story. I guess "Keep it up!" isn't quite the right expression here but I think you know what I mean;-)

All the best,

R.

that kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time i was reading....

i enjoyed it, and would really enjoy seeing more like this from U

This story was so HOT it melted my computer monitor!

As the title says ...

Loved this story, it's hot and the description is very good. Well done keep writing

Wow that made me dizzy just reading it. Very good hun...

fingers in my wet cunt and tasting them after reading this hot cunt licking story, key board all wet from my cunt wet fingers,

I love the authority role this beautiful mistress took over her little kitten. I wish the mother of the submissive would have walked over to speak with the powerful lady, as her daughter was under the table showing her devotion to her "new mommy"!

I'm a guy who doesn't often read lesbian stories but I was wandering through the tags and arrived here. HOT doesn't even begin to describe this one. A great read, this would stand up in any genre, well written with the sex paced perfectly. I started to wonder who was the sub and who the dom, but you keep coming back to the reality. Thank you Milene, I must check out your other stories.

Milene was amazing. Plot, pacing, hot sex, powerful domme and inspiring sub all rolled into a riveting read. Thank you.

This was absolutely great. Artfully done. Everything about it- well written. I rarely read erotica but this is great.

I so wished it was me there between her legs and licking every part of her.

Could I take the spanking too? Yes, anything she wanted from me.

Just let me take her place and serve this dominant lady.

Sometimes i fancy myself as a very good writer, then i read something as beautifully written as this story, and i know i have a long way to go before i can consider myself even a basement dweller in the building where you reside in the penthouse. This was a wonderful story in every way...hot as porn, tantalizing as erotica, well-written as literature. Can you tell i loved it (smile). And on all those levels...i will be wet for weeks! Thank you for the experience.

Thanks for the great story. My wife really enjoyed. I think she would love to be in your shoes and be forced to pleasure another woman.

Another fantastic story. One of my favorites for sure. I love one sided dominant/submissive oral sex. Pushing boundaries in public then the humiliation of eating sweaty ass. Mmmm. Simply the best.

Lesbian seduction and D/s. Outstanding.

I agree with SEP, nothing better than seduction, submission. Thank you

I swear I'm not kidding. I've had dates a little like this. There are girl bars in Washington DC near me. Yes, I'm bi. Yes, I love D/s and bondage. The detailed sex is exquisite. This is a wonderful lust story... not exactly a love story.... unless they make future dates. Very exciting. Very realistic. Thank you.

Loved the story line all the way through! Keep up the great writing! You have a wonderful talent! Don't think that I've ever seen a literotica story with so many (33) positive comments. And now you've made yet another Milene fan!

Not bad for a fantacy. But in real life you would not get away with this very many times before you caught a S T D.

Milene could learn so much, i do hope Lydia decides to keep her and train her to perfection. Well written, very sexy, and this is a story that has so much more to give...as i suspect does naughty little Milene.

Sweet Goddess, Each Stories Getting Hotter And Sexier,,, Yes! 😮

Hallo Milene!

You know I honestly believe your stories, have gotten hotter and sexier with each story we read, and a little closer to one of Queen Jackie's and my favorite fetishes! 🤗

Thank-You... 6-Stars and 6-Yummy Yummy Orgasms!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat..

Sweet Goddess, Each Stories Getting Hotter And Sexier,,, Yes! 😮

Hallo Milene!

You know I honestly believe your stories, have gotten hotter and sexier with each story we read, and a little closer to one of Queen Jackie's and my favorite fetishes! 🤗

Thank-You... 6-Stars and 6-Yummy Yummy Orgasms!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat..

Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! It's a Great story!

Thought I was gonna cum in my pants on page one...

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pages. HOLY HOTNESS. FUCKOHDEAR.